This story is really good. I love how you potray the characters. Also, I really love that you put Turles into the fanfiction as well. I nearly forgot about the existence of Turles until I read this fanfic. Ehehehe..

But it has been a long time since you updated. I hope you aren't abandoning this story because I'm looking forward to the next chapter..!

Having Bardock here just serves to highlight how much of an idiot Goku is. Though I suppose Goku being stupid did give us Piccolo so it's not all bad.

Bardock and Piccolo. My two favorite DBZ characters.

Stop cutting off tails.

Toriyama doesn't know how to kill characters. Which resulted in death being meaningless. He really should have just stuck to 1 revive chance and stop making loopholes.

One small fix. Krillin should have said 1 minute is like 6 hours. It's more accurate.

We have Kaioken and Super Saiyan with their ridiculous power multipliers. Ideally Kaioken should have stayed at times 2 while Super Saiyan only got times 10. Using the excuse that it's the power of Oozaru but under the Saiyan's complete control.
Anyway, canon gripes aside, Piccolo having a boost method is believable. We have seen Slug turn massive like an Oozaru, so it figures Piccolo could do something similar.
Not so sure about Bardocks new future sight.
Otherwise great chapter.

Why would Bardock let Bulma talk to him like that?
Also, why are Krillin and Bulma randomly being assholes to Bardock? He didn't do anything wrong?

That's 2 for 2 now. Of scenes that don't work in the context of the story. Will chapter 3 have such a scene too?

Why did Bardock let Piccolo take Gohan?

K so I already made a comment earlier but this is pretty rad. I really like how the writing has progressed over the chapters. I rather enjoy the story and excitedly await an update.

Wait so if Bardock is 25 and was sent 20 years into the future and Raditz is 34 then Bardock would've had a 14 year old child at 25, meaning Raditz was born when he was 11. That's a little odd, so I wanted to point that out for clarity's sake.

Oh a Bardock story! I love that guy.

Wish there was more Gine and Bardock stories where they both survive. Oh well... Hey maybe I can write one. o.o

hey nice chapter mate saw a spelling mistake you ment bardock not raddits at the hospital bit but other than that it good can't wait to see more

Excellent work can't wait for more

Great read, keep it up.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Raditz attitude is a bit annoying, surely Vegeta’s goal of destroying Frieza should rub off on him and upon seeing his dead-for-20 years Father stop him from staying loyal to Frieza.

To go as far as killing you’re own father just to defend Frieza’s name is a bit over the top imo, especially when Frieza doesn’t even know whats happened.

Anyway good start and interesting plot, lets see what happens.