interesting

I still feel bad for rin

as archer he let waver leave but as caster he was willing to protect them

Great and interesting story

Sequel please with Shirou summon Adult Karna.

Please tell me that it''s gonna have a sequel

it would be cool
i honestly did not expect him to be that calm and awed as he died lol

This was a great story I never have seen anyone consider this plot as a idea to move off of would you consider doing a sequel I would love to read it.

A very fun story, and one I wouldn't mind seeing a sequel to, either in the holy grail war or through Lord El-Melio's Case files

now its getting repetitive but please make a sequel

I love this, especially how Gilgamesh ended up not being an a**hole. As many here in the reviews said already, I would love to see a sequel with Shirou Velvet joining the 5th war to stop the disaster.

Also, since Kirei hasn't killed Tokiyomi and Kariya hasn't attacked Aoi, it means Rin still has her mother to raise her (though Kirei will still teach her magecraft). Could be interesting how different Rin would have turned out with that difference...

I would say my favourite scene in the story so far was how Shirou tried to save Lancer after he stabbed himself, giving lancer a more peaceful death, that Shirou has restored Lancer's hope for humanity in his last moments before dissipating into prana.

It's a great story. Love how the story shown the good side of all the characters. Especially Gil, could never imagined him to be that good. Hope there's a sequel for this.

Where's the sequel.

Please do a sequel.

Holy shit, that dialogue between Karna and Kirei was incredible, and I don't think many people thought of that angle