It a same it abandend it was realy getting good and interesting so far its the the best time travel i ever read and didnt get bored with it after reading it but hats of to you auther-san for the wonder full story realy LOVED IT XD!

No vas a seguir con la historia?

Yes that was definitely worth the wait,awesome stuff

You actually had the balls to off teach ,my hats off to ya , love how you did it too ,and Lucy having gear second and if luffy teaches her Soru she will be a beast, all in all an excellent chapter

Uh oh! Look out World! You've now got a version of Luffy that if you touch his little sis, he will tare you limb from limb and then allow the darkness to consume your soul. ):)

That was sick ,that’s the kind of Luffy I wanna see !

You nailed this chapter ,it’s so well written I might just read it again , yosh!

This is good yo, like it !

I so wanted Chou Chou to go with them.

No Lucy pairing please.. if she's filling in the role of the canon Luffy but a female version, then she should be completely oblivious to any romance and have no interest other than her dream and friends. I don't mind the Sanji possibly trying to flirt with her, but being too terrified of Luffy to try anything but, no pairing or if there is a so called pairing, give her a brother complex for Luffy?

Seriously? I start enjoying this fanfic and then I read the cancellation notice. Could you next time put it at the front so I don’t get into the story.

What Luffy didn't eat his gum gum fruit but Lucy did? am surprised and nice one Luffy beating up that stupid bandit leader and luffy and Lucy meet ace and Sabo and become friends and brothers and sister and now I got a question what type of devil fruit power will Luffy have?.

Thank you for making this a one piece time travel story but this time Luffy got twin sister Lucy and his crew and allies grow even stronger and it's Luffy and Harem awesome.
Romance pairs:
Ace and Lucy
sabo and koala.

love the story line you need to keep it going

Well, I really enjoyed reading so thanks! I would have liked to keep reading or maybe see a time skip to a Luffy-Shanks reunion but I totally get why You would want to stop too. So thanks for the fic! v