I want nuclear Armageddon. Everyone must die.

Also I hope u revisit the destruction of the ISS cause something like that would be monitored by half of the worlds space agencies

Hope to see more

I’m tellin ya, use Rods From God and nukes, easiest and most effective way to completely destroy Remanant and all the shit it brought with it.

Fucking Remnant, had to do something dumb and now we gotta destroy em with nukes.

Combine!?

Quick, someone grab a crowbar!

I honestly enjoyed this story until Chapter 3, which you screwed up by doing a sabotage between Australia and Menagerie relations. And Nicodemus V was right, you have put lots of flaws into this story.

I'm gonna repeat what Nicodemus V. There are a bit of mistakes here so I have to edit this a bit, Nic V.

"Ok, I think there’s been some major mistakes made here.

I understand wanting to show off Earth technology and all, so showing the shuttle launch is cool.

What’s NOT cool is revealing our nuclear capabilities. I think that’s the last thing any nation would want to disclose with another nation, let alone four, let alone the entire planet. If it were up to me, I wouldn’t have included that but at all, at worst just a brief mention.

And the ISS part. I understand the value behind this scene, as it foresdhadowsing something bigger to come, but it’s absurd that an STS mission would have launched to the ISS while the ISS is destroyed; it would have been scrubbed immediately, not even considered in the face of the destruction of the ISS. Which is another thing; the ISS and all satellites (artificial and organic) are monitored carefully by numerous space administrations around the world. SOMEONE would have noticed, Be it NASA, the CNSA, or ESA.

Please, revise this chapter, and if not, just don’t make mistakes like that again. It makes us (Earth) look stupid and incompetent, which is the last thing we are despite what people think."

Because of this, I'm gonna re-read Remnant in Earth by NewtypeAuthor346 because I feel it is more enjoyable to read. Hopefully, NewtypeAuthor346 will not screw up rewriting the story with new infos from Volume 4 and 5, and the upcoming Volume 6.

Keep writing, my dude!

This is some good stuff

Huh, I thought the White Fang would have done that, but this outcome is much better.

Ok, I think there’s been a major mistake made here.

I understand wanting to show off Earth technology and all, so showing a shuttle launch is cool.

What’s NOT cool is revealing our nuclear capabilities. I think that’s the last thing any nation would want to disclose with another nation, let alone four, let alone an entire planet. If it were up to me, I wouldn’t have included that but at all, at worst just a brief mention.

And the ISS part. I understand the value behind this scene, as it foresdhadows something bigger to come, but it’s absurd that an STS mission would have launched to the ISS while the ISS is destroyed; it would have been scrubbed immediately, not even considered in the face of the destruction of the ISS. Which is another thing; the ISS and all satellites (artificial and organic) are monitored carefully by numerous space administrations around the world. SOMEONE would have noticed, Be it NASA, the CNSA, or ESA.

Please, revise this chapter, and if not, just don’t make mistakes like that again. It makes us (Earth) look stupid and incompetent, which is the last thing we are despite what people think.

This is awesome. I wonder if Pokémon were ISOTed there, and fully sentient...the White Fang would have a huge surge of recruits from Pokémon who wish to be seen as sentient beings instead of animals.

did the fragments of the shattered moon of Remnant destroy the ISS or the grims also has a space variant?

Oh shit!
What the hell just happened?

I love the concept! The story's realistic enough to have suspension of disbelief but at the same time still be in a fantasy setting. Please keep going!