Reviews for Mal and Jay
twinkiesnreads chapter 1 . 3/17/2019
that ending was funny.
TeamRosemmett chapter 2 . 11/10/2018
Are Carlos and Evie gonna be together in this story as you tagged them to be together
MADDIE chapter 1 . 10/23/2018
HYMADDIEIMLLU JGBJVBEJVBVV MAL JAY BAN LAVIKAESSIE
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2018
CHello hello my name is Ally when you have a marvelous day LJ doing I will you cry I love you like you tell Omar cherub you tell I’m a turtle man should be a mailman to r I told ️️ hello hello my name is Ally when you have a marvelous day LJ doing I will you cry oh I don’t like you tell Omar cherub you tell I’m a turtle man should be email chain of you to worry me ️️️️️
Ella chapter 4 . 4/24/2018
This is amazing! I completely lost it when Carlos and Jane were there though, it was so funny! I don't know why I ship this.. I just can't really help it! Keep up the good work and don't listen to the hate. I swear to the guacamole gods that I will murder anyone who says mean things about you and your writing!
sup chapter 4 . 10/8/2017
that was great i always wanted jay and mal to b a couple !
i want another chapter
Allie chapter 4 . 8/29/2017
I really love this story please make sure you update this story please it's so cute
Guest chapter 1 . 8/25/2017
I only ship this from the single moment in Its Going Down when Harry's hook was on Mal and Jay walked up like "If you touch her I will skin you with that hook alive."
Jal forever chapter 4 . 8/11/2017
I love this!
Could you make another fanfiction about Jal?
333555777rrrrssssrrrrssss chapter 4 . 7/19/2017
J and M chapter 4
Um Mal Jay said walking to her will you be my girlfriend? Yes! Mal said I'm so yours Jay she kissed him and Jay kissed her back. I love you Jay Mal said I love you too Mal Jay said back.
333555777rrrrssssrrrrssss chapter 1 . 7/19/2017
J an Jay what's wrong? Mal asked him oh nothing is wrong aw come on I know don't try to hide it from me. Oh ok everyone thinks that I'm a evil Villain just because my father is. Jay don't listen to what they say to you you're nothing like Jafar you are funny just like he is. I know that you know that you're not Jafar you're just misunderstood for being a Villain just like your father what? You know about that? Jay said yes I know that Mal said you and your father aren't even considered evil Villains anymore but why does everyone thinks that your father is evil? I don't know Disney accedently put my father and your mother in the wrong section in Disney they put our Parents as Disney Villains when they were supposed to be in the Heroes section not the Villains!
starflight34 chapter 4 . 6/26/2017
Lol. Carlos
I'm still laughing at Chad running and now In laughing even more because of Jay saying 'Where were we' or something like that.
The end... for now
Yay! If it's the end then I day that this was great and made my day and that you're an amazing writer and good job.
If it's not then that's my cue to squeal like Evie until my lungs collaps. Haha. Either way, great job! :)
starflight34 chapter 3 . 6/26/2017
Oh come on Maleficent!
Poor Mal. Come on Jay! You can do this!
Great job by the way. This is like, awesome!
starflight34 chapter 2 . 6/26/2017
No! Jay come back!
Oh my gosh! I love this book! Great job!
starflight34 chapter 1 . 6/26/2017
Omg! I love this! I'm gonna go so I can keep reading!