Next chapter please.

Hell to the no with that Kishimoto forgiveness crap.

Nice. But I do wonder how will Kurotsuchi get in Ryuu's harem, but still, it's nice to see Suzumebachi and Kotohime getting some attention.

Damn, what a great story so far can't wait to see more anyways keep up the great work!

looks interesting with all the gender bending you are doing any chance of gender swapping kisame and having him in one of the harems

interesting chapter and kurotsuchi is in the harem for ryuu I thought she betrayed him that should be interesting.

ew sakura ill just have to pretend she is no there other than that love this so far

Great story so far. I did want to ask if Hisame will be in Naruto's harem? Again my sympathies for dealing with immature fans.

For that explosion release, will you eventually advance it to where it’s like how Bambietta Basterbine from bleach?

I love the story! you get to see much of the 4 tails so it's refreshing to find this hidden gem of a story! hope to see this updated soon!

Quite nice so far. I can only imagine how crazy this is gonna get with Pandora and Lucifer of all weapons to be chosen for NAruto and Ryuu.

Also for the harems, I'd really like to see Tayuya for Naruto and a fem Kimimaro for Ryuu, since her Kekkei Genkai would probably fit Lucifer's exploding swords.
Now I hope nothing of this is gonna be redundant considering I've yet to read the 2nd chapter.

that is epic to see, nice job, but sorry i don't have any more ideas to give.

I feel like your short on a girl or two. Maybe a long lost sister of naruto or alternate naruto of an alternate world because of a jutsu gone wrong, naruko for Ryuu, and a genderbending of thing sasuke is Suki.

Maybe minor crossover characters of like one piece of fairy tail like Robin and hancock, with juvia and flare (those are just my favorite characters from those series) for any of the two boys.

Or maybe someone from RWBY like Yang, and Nora, as both of them like to blow stuff up or wreck thing for Ryuu, with Ruby and Pyrrha for their gentle nature for Naruto.

You should take off Sakura and add someone else Sakura to me is like a go back to start card from monopoly. (She's just terrible)

Please give Naruto guren instead not many stories out there with her as a romantic interest for Naruto