Reviews for One Girl with Ten Brothers
SolarRodan chapter 28 . 8/18
Is this because of season 5? Since the loud kids will age up a year?
morgan kingsley chapter 28 . 8/16
One thing that I found amusing in this chaptr was the larger amount of curse words and the like. I personally have nothing against that type of speech, and it honestly just felt like the way that I could imagine real teenagers talking. So I personally would not mind use of them. In fact, in a story with ten brothers living in a house and a sister, it would just feel more unrealistic not to have it.

Anyways, onto a different thing. So since we have now had an official birthday here, does this mean that going forward everybody will now be having a official age up of a year or something? I mean, I know you mentioned that you are not too worried about doing that in this story once, but I figured that with this chapter plus the fact that its been confirmed that the real season 5 will have a age jump, I think it would only seem just like a good time to do it if is to be done.

And as one of the favorites in the line up, I always enjoy having a chapter where Lars does have a larger role in the grand scheme of things. Sue he isn't the main character in his chapter, but he is still a driving force.

Also found some enjoyment over the dads minimal role here. Just seemed like something my real life dad would be like.

Not much else to say this chapter. Not too surprising since this is the shortest chapter since the return you made back last June, when I started reading along and actually saw the chapters update as you went.
Shiranai Atsune chapter 28 . 8/15
Yey! A new update!

So long, so good, so worth the wait!

Still love this!
Geo Soul chapter 27 . 8/15
I have a Dark Sad 3 Part idea PM me
Guest chapter 27 . 7/28
Me gusto el capitulo, Porque no haces uno de Las historia de una chismosa
Morgan Kingsley chapter 1 . 6/27
Not much of a review, just wanted to comment happy third birthday to this story since I was just passing by casually again and saw the story was three years old today
Guest chapter 1 . 6/16
Can you do father's day chapter
Guest chapter 1 . 6/10
Sorry forget put game off my bad
Guest chapter 1 . 6/10
Can you please do chapter off
Guest chapter 27 . 6/6
this story really caught me, I can't wait to read the continuum.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/28
It's bad i like this fanfic better then the show
IAmFallenAngel chapter 27 . 5/7
Do you ship Robbie Dan and Linka? well if you do can you do a chapter of them on going on a date or something? It's up to you if you want to do it or not. Btw Hope you update soon! :D
IAmFallenAngel chapter 6 . 4/25
This is SOOOOOOO cute! EEEEEKKKKKKKK
Morgan Kingsley chapter 27 . 4/22
Hey its me finally lol. I will give some thought on the chapter in here now that I finished it

My favorite part was the hunchback scene. I really enjoyed that scene and I liked the scene with Claudia as well.

I like how you were able to incoperate a version of the characters in the movies and just found a relatively seem less way to create a girl version of these people to present Linka.

I also enjoyed the April fools scene and the beauty and the beast scene as my second and third choices. I would say on the whole the second part was s bit more fun to read as I enjoyed almost all those ones.

While I will say the final battle did feel rushed I don't blame you too much as you are bringing in like 10 different movies for the scene and had to find a way to just make them all have some screen time. It must be hard to accomplish.

I do like how you threw in more than just the brothers as well like Robbie, Claudia and Bebe to make it shown you are not just locked into these characters in the family as well

Overall its a long chapter but it needed to be so I don't mind. That said, I am curious in if you plan to combine the other two parters as well.

Thanks for the long chapter and I will see you next time
Pan567Cakes chapter 12 . 4/14
How DID the brothers react to Linka's first period? That would be an interesting story.

Also, how about a tickle fight story? I'm honestly kind of surprised that tickle fights haven't happened in the actual show from what I've seen. I mean, eleven siblings and not one bout of tickling between them? I mean I know you have a lot of ideas and suggestions for stories, but I hope you consider it.
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