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Loved it Guzma is a favorite of mine a bad boy worth saving who just needs a good reason to save himself.

The writing quality is good in terms of your spelling and grammar, but the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken for being a second person or you-based story:

Entries not allowed:
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.

You should remove all elements related to the reader and replace them all with a canon character or original character. Switch to the first person or third person point of view. Alternatively, you can move it to a site where it's allowed like Archive Of Our Own. Outside of that, you know how to keep the characters in character.