calling him an idiot isnt very conducive to having a successful party where they can trust each other is it? Not a good way to display positive feelings.. I liked the premise, how she did everything up to that point to be honest but the hell? He knew what he was doing why call him an idiot after he finally changed his mind?

While Beater is a thing, I think only Kibaou and his lackeys really have energy left to care about beaters and what not after floor 10 or so...

Where is update!?

This is very nice. I'm enjoying it immensly. You are amazing at keeping everyone true to character. Thank you for this addition.

You write well. I hope this isn't dead?

This is one of the best sao fanfics ive read. Keep up the good work!

Awesome job so far.

I like Asuna and Kirito's reactions, in that they aren't immediate buddy buddy with each other. Slow burns like these are rare, especially good ones.

Also, the whole fleshing out the events with Argo and Klein was wonderful. Hope to see more character interactions from you.

Thank you for the chapter.

The quality of your writing is really good, keep up the great work and update soon.

Update soon plz, I really love your story.

This's a great chapter!

Like it

This was a good chapter. I liked the first scene with Argo and her interaction with Kirito as well-it felt very in-character for her, which is a big plus in my fanfiction book, as Argo is one of my favorite characters.

I agree with KimranReech that it might be a good idea to read up about the novels on SAO wiki. It is kind of trippy that you have so many references from the first Progressive novel (Argo walking in on Asuna, lol) but none of the others, IMPO... Though I can see why you'd want to separate the two so you aren't basically copying off the novels for the first six floors or so. Just keep in mind that what you're writing *is* different, in some ways-I can see a little difference in Kirito's character/motivations at this point, and of course that first scene didn't happen that way in the novels.

Just keep it consistent with the novel-happenings but write original content for the floors - we all like Kirisuna bonding, no matter the form, lol. Stir things up with the events. Add some Argo madness. You have the potential for it.

And, you know, worst comes to worst, just make it anime-verse and it'll still be an improvement over Partners. Just saying.

Yay new chapter my day got better

I like how you write Argo. Just the right amount of caring and aloofness. About you not having read the other Progressive novels that's fine but you know that you can simply read up on almost every important detail in them on the SAO wiki, right? Maybe try that if you haven't already. PS: Isn't Klein's hair red and not orange?

And here I am eight chapters in and not even out of the first floor yet.

smh.

Thanks for the upload. Look forward to more.