Im a little disappointed with the no pairings route youve taken, you dont have to change their dynamic if you pair Harry and Albedo. I mean, in the end arent couples really just monogamous friends with benefits? If your putting on airs then the relationship becomes artificial.

Lame

Please update

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Kinda sad Momon won't be in this.

Please update soon

But I liked the leaved... it was cute lol

Grest job

Good work

Great job

Nice job. There are things in both this and the other one I like.

I might like this one better than what is probably the rewrite the beginning was more direct.

Your mc seems weak as shit. Just make him carry around or equip a world item. That way, other world items can’t effect him. If Harry was really a magic caster on the same level as Momonga, then there should be no reason for him to be so weak. He even has magic and abilities that aren’t from Yggdrassil and apparently been alive for who knows how long but all lackluster compared to Momonga. He’s just so pathetic. First he nearly faints, none of his magic seems particularly powerful, can’t do shit to Dragonoids? And gets bitched around by some trash who isn’t even level 20. You’re not making a convincing case here bud.

...I have no idea what happened between these last few chapters and the first few, but it feels so rushed. You're jumping around constantly; it feels like I skipped four or five chapters.

Please update soon.