ok that 1as on both of then though athena took it to far and turned her into a spider monster I mean seriously the girl had natural talent in the art and it was the people boosted her ego

MAKE HIM NOT SUCH A P*ssy

SUCH A B*ch he can’t even stand up for himself I like this but parts like these piss me off

He should’ve beaten him back instead of being a freaking beta

Hestia can summon food...

Why did you stop writing this?

Ok, ok pretty interesting so far

I’m confused where did Grover come from and what about the rule of three and where did peter come from I thought he was playing with Cerberus. I’m sorry if this sounds negative but I’m just very confused but up to this point one of the best fanfic I’ve read and I have read a lot of fanfic

I’m confused when did Grover get there he wasn’t there in the previous chapter and doesn’t that break the rule of three and I thought peter was with

Wrong. Arachne is a mortal human, not a daughter of Athena. The goddess of wisdom would have too much pride and try to argue to make her daughter immortal for her expertise, not turn her into the first spider.

*facepalm* Death is a male, not female. Death is Thanatos, the PERSONIFICATION of death, death is he and he is death. Death is not just a domain for him, but it is him.

This story confuses he all like rarggg inhate the gods then goes and does nothing

I understand why you copy it from the book with slight changes here and there, but thats the easy way out don't do it

Chapter 30 has a lot of grover talk, grover isnt here, dont copy and paste word for word from the book. I'm not trying to be mean im just pointing out spelling mistakes.

I thought in an earlier chapter it said that Peter took care of Gabe