Christian is so annoying

Love the chapter but we need lemons!

This has been a delight to read! A new favourite of mine! I actually enjoyed the last half of the story more than the first half... I loved the mini story of Elliot and Cadie

It should gave been Teddy not Arielle.

Wow thanks for the very good read.

I actually feel so offended by what grace said to Ana

Omg I'm loving this story I haven't stopped crying .

I think Ana has to leave. The fact t that Christian has no intention of giving up Elena ‘he just has to hide it better’ saysit all. He loves himself and thinks he ownsAna. Telling her in counseling that making a decision together is wrong , that sometimes someone has to take control, and that someone is him proves everything.

All of this and it doesn’t even all of the other duplicitous things he’s done, to Kate, to José, being in contact with Leila, as always he is a spoiled adolescent who wats his own way. I hope he can change because he is the one who is so terribly wrong.

Should have left the lemons in.

I’ve read all 40 chapters and for a while wasn’t happy with Christian still being friends with Elena and betraying Ana by lying to her about wanting children and then admitting he didn’t. Having a vasectomy without telling her was so dishonest in a relationship from someone you trust completely fall apart quickly. I kept reading because I was curious to see how you were going to get these two people who loved each other back together again. You did a great job in getting everyone in the Grey family back together and happy with lots of children. I was okay with Elena never coming back to hurt anyone. Good read.

What the hell He can’t leave her like that

Oh my goodness I so love a happy ending mercy all these kids and now Christian takking about another one oh my gracious well maybe they will never know and yes Ana did save him by fighting about a baby
Good riddance to bad rubbish as in Imposter John Flynn
Well damn Kate the bitch don't think she will live to see parole but come to think of it with her fighting all the time and damn getting pregnant and taking the baby's life in her own hands trying to abort it hell maybe she should have died and saved the tax payers some money
Amazing story loved it love how your mind works. What we can do with our imagination is boundless keep up the fantastic work
Thanks for sharing and I just found you and your amazing stories a few days ago

HELL YEAH the BITCH got life she is so fuckin crazy that she thought they would let her walk out of there yeah she lost big time had a wonderful man 3 beautiful children had it made and fucked it up by trying to kill her best friend and unborn baby cause she was so obsessed with Christian cause he rejected her oh well I would say get a life Kate but you ain't gotta worry about that cause you can bet your bottom dollar you won't ever see the outside again. Elliot has a new wife and Kate can't stand it cause he went from someone like her to the nanny but Kate needs to realize that Cadie loved him and those children for them not for what Elliot can give her and he gives her the only thing she wants is his love. So long to bad rubbish
Christian is silly about the baby being a boy cause he hides his junk but dang if they didn't have a little boy love the name so happy for them

Awesome and like Ana said when she was ready she would come and talk to Elliot hopefully Elliot won't run his big mouth again cause I damn know for sure that Cadie will leave his ass.
Oh my goodness how the hell is Kate gonna handle this if she finds out ? Oh gonna be so much fun to put the bitch in her place cause Kate the bitch is going down

Well Ava got her fairy costume Cadie made it how sweet
Elliot heard them on Skype and wanted to talk to her but as Ana said give her time
Christian tried to help but Cadie knows what she wants but Elliot I believe is still on the fence