Me reading 2020

Am I still excused to not review it's 2019... oh wait...
Nice story looking forward to finishing it

I love it keep up the good work

i read this in 2019 do almost 2020

Please continue this!

THIS IS SOOOO GOOD PLEASE I NEED MORE.

Peter needs to tell the Avenger Everything and Everyone he met in that place. Plus I hate this bullshit of Calling everyone prey and specimen. Another thing you need to realize is there is scum who might actually take some of what you write and act it out and actually do. Have you ever heard of Orwell's 1984? Peter giving into this evil is turning him into something wrong. Peter show never agree to anything evil. And too many think they can't say no and give in. I have had people try to make me do something I know is wrong and I refused every time. It's easy. Yes, I hate pain but I refuse to consent to hurt another to save myself. To do so is to have yourself to evil and the devil. There are too many these days who cannot tell the difference between right and wrong and good and evil getting them reversed. And sadly they are going to lose everything including their lives. Especially if they refuse to learn when someone tries to teach them and set them straight. Do as to save them by both the mind body and soul. So they don't get sent to the same place meant for Fallen Angels and their Demon spawn. Demons are disembodied Nephilim.

Whoever the hell this Colonel is He is one who should be put to death on site. Plus Peter should Have been taught full morals and ethics and the Laws of the Heavenly Father and what the consequences are for breaking them. I've never like how many shows just lock up these scumbags and not putting them to death so they can just escape going back what they did before. And by these pieces of scum did they turn the kids into something they otherwise wouldn't. Peter should have told him do you realize what you are doing is wrong evil and against the law. Do you even care that you are going to suffer for your crimes when you face the Heavenly Father and the Messiah on judgment day? Plus do you know the saying "a fool says there is no God"?

So if you ever finish this if you ever do you better as he'll point out what is wrong and the Consequences. And that Lightfall is found and all of its members are executed and their crimes are given to the public. And point out that the same will happen to anyone and everyone who repeat what they have they will die meaning executed so as to make sure they can never do it again.

This also show another illegal action turning kids into killers. That is one of the reasons I believe all governments who use kids as assassins and child soldiers need to be arrested and exicuted and their government revoked. And the people of the Nations told why their government no longer exists and their Leaders are being put to death if they haven't already. And any government who uses children as spys also buy buy. So if you read my comments you get the idea how wrong I see this. And thus showing how these kids have no idea how wrong this is. And that they shouldn't being learning this bullshit criminal behavior. So in the end all governments of the world are criminal. And they will go buy buy at Armageddon and all the leader will lose everything including their live for their criminal activities against The people the Earth and The Heavenly Father.

Such people need to be put to death for their crimes/sins. No exception I don't give a shit about people who are against the Death Penalty. Because they don't see the reason for it. I especially would push for the the death penalty for all crimes against children of all ages for all crimes no exceptions. And all criminal organizations and their members should be put to death.

And considering what I know about the real world and most of our scientists are scum with no morals and believe they can do what ever they want and refuse to believe their are laws and rules. And by having a mandutory death penalty no exceptions is to make the evil criminal element think twice
much of this bullshit you wrote in your story and happens in real life happened. Plus to many dismiss the all the writing of the Bible much of this shit happened pre-flood which is one of the reasons for the flood. And one of those crimes is genetic engineering. Illegal Scientific Projects that violate the laws of the Heavenly Father. And those stinking crimes were against humans and animals alike. Just as it is now. but now it includes plants as well. But could have been then to. Many of the Crimes where mentioned in the ancient book of Enoch.

And the way these scumbags are treating the people they took like they are not people. And that they have no rights. So I hope in the end all the people of Lightfall and the other scum is exicuted on the spot. And anyone stupid enough to join those asses Deserve to die ass well no exception. The Boffins need to be put to Death.

And thank God their are scientists who realize what is going on is wrong and refuse to participate in such activities and are doing everything they can to spill the beans to stop them Plus many of such are Believers in the Heavenly Father. And Accept the fact that if they did these crimes they would suffer as what their criminal collieges would suffer.

i love the fact that peter\bug and binary are gay, i hope you make them a couple hencing the kiss, still its amazing, yes there are more chapters i need to read i just had to share my thoughts with you and i love your work with this.

This is really good, will you please update soon?:)

Please update soon

YES! This is so cool to see what was going through Peter/Bugs head through all of this. So excited to know why he wasn't talking too. Curious as to what you're going to do with his muteness. And for both another recap,and how the team is going to react to his not knowing them. Keep it up!

*screams internally*