Loved the story! Really great writing, and so interesting that Sachi was blind. Smart to give her a “seeing eye bug” :)

Lmao that's true... Sachi literally named all of the kikai Kai lol.

OMG This chapter was so good! Shino's proposal was so simple yet so heartfelt! The proposal totally matches Shino's personality. 10/10!

This was so heartwarming and comforting to read, I had a great time with this story. Thank you so much for writing this!

Please update. I need a good shining fic in my life

Hey, I love this story! I’m always a sucker for a good Shino romance, and you built this one up so so well! These two are simply adorable together! 3

Anyways, if you still need songs about revenge, I’m fond of “You’re Going Down” by the Sick Puppies.

“Hell to Your Doorstep” from the musical adaptation of ‘The Count of Monte Cristo’ is also AMAZING.( I particularly like the cover Caleb Hyles did over on YouTube. Seriously, even if you don’t need more songs, it’s worth a listen.)

Man oh man reading the ending makes me want to read it all again!

This was great. Thanks for sharing. :)

Another thing I wanted to say is you really gave the reader a look into a civilian’s life, which really sets you apart from other Naruto fanfics where both the main characters are shinobo.

I just have to say I read your story in one night it was such a good story. You took the such time and payed a great deal to detail. You really gave Shino the kind of love he deserves.

Adorable, cute, couldn't look away after first chapter. Seriously waiting for another update. :)

THANKS SO MUCH FOR THIS AWESOME FANFIC! I'm so happy you finished this story and do it for all of them. This was my first OC/shino story and it was so cute and realistic and AH! Again, thanks so much for this story and good luck writing!

I so love thi and your take. Ohhh it was so feelsy and sigh lovely. Is there still more or is this it?

#Nostalgia X3

Let me tell you, I never gave Shino much thought before until the other night, I had this random dream about him and it piqued my interests. I found this fic and the journey it took me on was beautiful. It was well written, different, unique, and most of all addicting. I started it at maybe 10 pm last night? I finished around 4 am (even though I needed to be up at 7 am). Then as soon as I had free time I came back to review. You wrote Shino so well. Sachi and her family were beautifully written characters and I enjoyed reading about all of them so much. Most of all, it felt really realistic. However you did the same thing everyone does after a marriage proposal and it made me sad. I really wish we'd gotten more of their first time together intimately. Not the smutty details but the emotions and actions leading up to a tasteful fade to Black. I really wanted to see how Shino behaved when it came to their first time, especially with Sachi being blind. But other than that I loved it.