Reviews for Cursed sion, Moon's Love
Guest chapter 5 . 6/15
Such a bad fanfiction disappointed
The god of wrath chapter 3 . 5/2
This feels cringy and too rushed. You should have Perseus ease into his romance with Artemis. Do a bit more character in world-building. I like the dialogue and action outside of Artemis and perseus's love affair.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/2
Its...good? I don't mind reading this but it does feel off in different places. It's good to always remember that try reading what you wrote from different angles.
Arraia chapter 6 . 4/17
Perfect and update soon please
Percy x Artemis
mcdn11 chapter 6 . 4/17
Dude this is awesome! The fact that we started hating Percy but now we see another side of him (and him being controlled) is just amazing. Keep up the good work!
PrehistoriCreatorNP chapter 5 . 7/11/2019
WTF!
Guest chapter 4 . 10/21/2018
Not enough background to tell wtf is happening imo... nothing really makes sense at this point in time.
Dangit chapter 4 . 10/20/2018
Why have u not updated!
hello chapter 4 . 9/20/2018
chapter tomorrow thx
Smh chapter 4 . 9/20/2018
Oh come on, that fight was so weak. Where the hell is badass Percy?
Guest chapter 4 . 9/20/2018
Is this is a pertemis? Cuz I love a Pertemis fic. Everything is kind of jumbled and weird right now, but hopefully it starts to make sense down the road.
Lord Perseus III chapter 3 . 5/20/2018
this is really good. but im confused isnt andy his sister? why woyld she call the mum she is avenging a slut?
Sageofchaos chapter 3 . 5/17/2018
hope to read more.
Cosmos871 chapter 3 . 5/16/2018
“Bring it on asshole” DO IT! KILL THAT BITCH! SHE CALL SALLY A SLUT!? KILL! HER!
0zymandias chapter 3 . 5/16/2018
its really good
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