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Debbie Hicks chapter 1 . 3/6
2. Chapter 2. herelf bite him haerdest ate blood marked him then he did the same to Both then then were with Aliens/Vulcan then the three then CLAIRE ATREYU Bitten kids/toddlers went wild to others to make their army the needdles good yiu Isabella perish he Bot them they with him/the three bite get hr/him/the army the for crimes yyou Isabella are charged with murder the her assasaulted while modeling in her movie wedding dress then Abused battered by force the blood as all of it then too late good more of it her rich aroma then her screams was heard with theirs Mauled but both then suddenly the too late brought there good with they the immortal children bitten drained of blood is dead both cords good with him then wit the four were too late the spreading venom nuked them had eight freaks followed so they you Irina/others are guilty of hybrids then wiht the corpses Exploding vaporizing then with her good guards they are Ashes with both nuked then too late Bella felt no pain herself was violated was still crying in tears sobbing of her inferltity herself sobbing lost blood a lot of it then more than as all of them hurting was battered was sick very sick feverish oh my god Alice do something she's dying Sam turn us/the imprints into Sailor guardians/knights they did then Nulled with they the too late was assasulted after the kids born the a special home/medical/milltary beauty treatment made her/them as all of them calmer serene peaceful in harmony into true empathy nuked as all of them both made Cursed Immortal beings sliced then With the kids's then too late god bring them there they are severed from humans blew up both the Became Immortal good they are cut from humans turned with both with as all saved rescued they are next see to it at once then it really happened Both lifeless but still cords good these ones are blood bonded what more than as all of it then too late murdered tore then suddenly herself placed a hand to his face herself was not human at all of it felt a Slower intimate but private expanded but longer soundtrack of the Highlander hair flying with bangs in movie clothes/both with both clad wearing in a Scarf of Scottish royal cloaks with a clip from the NASA Boodysuit Kissed her imprinted partner harder but compassionate but loving in her heart was beating his eyes of brown widen of her newly turned into a true Kolinahru Vulcan woman herself did live a ancient previous life oh god that's more mature swearing in ancient Scottish was unable to be beheaded so he/they the Sliced then but vanished good these ones wit as all of them in time were in fact not mortal see to it herself held a sword embraced her heritage had ears were pointed slanted mess with my clan I Seal it as a Highlander her cold piercing Kolinahru brown eyes were sadden in sorrow but in grief who meditated to calm herself to expand her thoughts Alice who done to her/they Rachel madam tears of his sister Jake oh my god we can't die it's our father sick again herself sobbing in sorrow Paul we can't die do something we ae superwerewolves he was more Muscular oh god we look amazing Rachel herself wept so Emily in holy tears to their ancestors dead herself was a telepath by touch was a Syarnnite all of them had Surak's katra were followers crap our families will be gone you ok oh my god that is very sacred Alice they were killed with us/they pointed ears slanted eyebrows she is falling in love with him so they gasp then Sliced then but vanished good these ones are dead then came herself never went old so they stopped aging too late the damages was done to her health herself swore in Ancient Scottish tongues was Gaelic Alice they were torn apart the nit really happened Rachel's Paul's mate in tears of her father will outlive her who brought pets had young had kids with her twin in tears of him sick their families worried of them will be in the ground Shrimp ulp he noticed him muscular 6 feet tall towering over him gulp he paled how strong he was angry at him watch it clansman what is that gasp her ears are pointed so ours nuked freely but to as all olf them then lost from here they were on Vulcan
MammaNita4 chapter 1 . 4/18/2019
Nicely done, Jacob got the girl!
MissAvotra chapter 1 . 1/16/2019
Hi! I didn't have time to read. And I discovered I had to catch up your stories. Thank you so much for writing. I almost forgot how talented you were and how your stories were amazing.
Paty4Hale chapter 1 . 9/13/2018
loved it!
Debbie Hicks chapter 1 . 7/15/2018
2. Chapter 2. then ALIEN RATTLESN AKESD MASUL Both swsith fiv e to more then ssuddeen ly herseelf killed aalieen s/Vulc an s was soulessssss fully tim e Volturi foun d her guity you con sorted with Lycan s Felix her scream s of FIRE Venom with his with theirs With child dead good they will be dead after the Shiftpires birthed too late MMMurdered tore HHuman ity from here then Alic e had as vision then thre three found them fin ally drain ed of as all lasat b lood then weere n ext with therm then then impaled then Executed from hallow bodies then fled get the n ewborn sa then then Chain ed her trial b egun you will not b e here Felix rip her aliv e she will b e Cullen with you b e Cullen ATOMIZED!With child desatroyeds then fled from help of both wsith both they were nuked with their kids destroyed b ring them to Volterra, Italy then too late brought them here the n ewborn s killed most as all of people had kids in death they were pun ished these ones are rouge wee sentenced them with as all of mazillions or as all of brought mazillion s or more as all remain as all of them are Put to death from as all of Con sorting with the supern atural beings to death it's saettled they are In to the home of the Cullen s exploded with both they aall of blew uop they are dead bring them here good then too late had them killed of were as all of them then Killed then suddenly the Venom was trapped sweeping was stranded far too late impaled from here fled from help as all of them after as all animal parents died beamed up then with as all with four's Corpses then were as all of most as all of them Vanished from then too late Bella said by orders of the United Federation of Planets stand down then All of them Exploded with deported things good with four we control Earth! but were as all of them with more as all of them with it more good then Destroyed from here then suddenly a birth of a Vessel suddenly blown freely activating it's Engines then Crunched freely transformed into a starship city ship then too late blew apart were more as all of them Warped from here NUKED Freley with as all of saved good never to b e born it fled from here then bodies as all of them bury them as all of them t'll oldest/Ancient age then too late the damages done to them nm erged with Heav en Exploded then b lew apart then were as all awaited souls were Destroyed with God/Angels with both then As alll of them fallen from here as all of them but it was hugest monstrous blown apart then suddenly Roared to Vulcan to find them then too late trapped into a dying black hole found Vulcan/planets then blown apart SUPERNOVA! Bring as all of charried bodies here then too late were as all of them extinct then too late m ore as all of them stolen looks/voices but homes as well remains of as all of them found Hulien guilty of killing killed her then with both then tore then burnt them were with ass all more now with as all now too late the head discovered she had stopped aging but with as all of them never had kids had as all of desendsants as asll of them they had her killed without mercy they did to packs year before young lady you are his oh my god my throat hurts then too late first hunt then with as all of them who converted then suddenly Sliced from the necks blew b ring them as all you die from here then Extinct then had as all of them b rought here good thedy will b e Dead here then suddenly too late the sliced made All of them immortal then were smashed from here punished then brought both then had declared them exiled on Vulcan/plan ets n ow were unable to procreate nuked freely then were poison ed then brought their as all of them then we declare they as assll of them are dead by blood loss are turned good they will not have more kids they did they are powerful but too strongest destroyed wonderous then too late were as all of them ashes then Heads blared off from here then too late more as all of Guards then the head found noting they had her drain ed of blood returned toxic waste Alice she's sterile with him with them oh my god they don e evil on to us/as all of them Bells Sch'n T'Gai T'Lar is my name what are you wearing White Martian Female's robes Vulcan religious jewelry head neck hands popped but healed no pulse or heartbeat an ymore never died or changed long Raven hair in a religious colif from help had stopped growth bangs were Curled herself had Dark Brown eyes paler her blood of Gaean Forest Green was a Scorching burned sacrificed a French pig to Khorsarr her adopted god of war her Teenaged Ocampan ears were pointed upswept richer but elegantly eyebrows were slanted looked like from Star Trek 3 the Search for Spock was a Vulcan Priestess was very holy but deeply spiritual but devout but more religious bound to no one swearing vows herself was a Acolyte of Mount Seleya she learn ed their religious ceremonial rites and was fluent the Vulcan first officer sighten her Sir! don't touch her mated but bonded her voice echoed to her his wife O' Arkaana lady of Vulcan killed a Rusian boar with my blade to you mistress of Water cool our race an d as all in peace Madam who dare to speak to me ulp we are took you the Volturi caused more as all of them they declared you are not welcomed to Earth you are born this way but they decree shifters extinct they are wiped out then too late now they were cloaked here nuked ftrom bodies shattered freely good they n ever b e birthed here but cursed with death forever then too late herself placed a Curse onto them they were n ext with her then ring them here are death based soullesss gods/goddesses that she became death Don't touch her she is Death a Priestess of Reah is reincarnated but she drinks blood eats souls then too late the damage to them herself brought sorrow loss and death now ruled with her mate within their castle of Shadows/Night with them nuked freely herself was a Spirit a good spirit she punished them by Curses hexed them all was different never dies or changes but is Ancient but Really old blown from here still walking today in 2018 with as all of them still ruling as their Queen he was her King of the Werewolves and Supernatural world were the rightous leaders then nuked from here blew freely bodies vanished now too late the bodies were as all of them buried in coffins were ashes their tombstones were made now no more as all of them suddenly too late as all of them were as all more mazillionsa without color to their skins were still here on Vulcan saved from hem Alice they caused as all of the coffin s are ashes we never had kids are cloaked like this deactivated we are departed but blood of animals converted us/mazillions to our diet violently poisoned now what we are Immortal by now then in time deactivation blew freely as all of them on to lands then suddenly pierced from here good they are departed here cursed to be bound on Vulcan forever too late were unable to see their corpses herself placed a deadly curse on to them then too late more as all of them as all of them.
Debbie Hicks chapter 1 . 6/25/2018
2. Chapter 2. Bella was with Eight suddeeeen ly allAlien Vulcasn Lethassl aCarnivorous with mated b ut pregasn t best frienbds with threr with child B ITTEN !While pregn ant then Drainerd from as aaaall of them the guard found her drin kin g fromb oth with aAn im al you dieee here Murdered a c hun k of skin /fleash was caused the kids then AAChain ed b lackn es we b ring you the newborn im print m other is dying of blod loss will die here of m urderimg b rainwash them as akll then SAtomized her of the criim e with them but herplentcta dettasch rib sb reoken thre then AAMurdered her weith child who died with weith theirs b roken then dying they punished her with therm straspped ZAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP! impaaled them all then hairs were deceasaed had only Eight bitten freely was Changing so they then SLICED! Blew from easch both b rought here she is turn ed goodfour as all of then too late wererecruited then herrself hadstotal m em ory loss after bitten was An mesiac had gained planetary powers after death they weere deported to Japan after ban ishmen t then too late the dam ages done to their reproductioon cycles then too laate IMPALED From hereblew freely thenb trought corpses then it was starting then herself had hair in b angs her kidswere growing had Borg Drone white skin colorless but palerher eyeswere Falkor's Red eyes herself was techically deceasaed with him with their forged the Phoenix Coven were unable to breed then it was too late her hair was the same after death so his with theirs they were infected weas a all-Venous truest carrierof the Shiftpire code with them were tainted the Cullens found her weith a family then Chained were back Tore from bodies were unable to sleep Of the dead host blaring Alice they did this then too late Heads removed with them then you are Cullens forever more then killed as all them then they brought them here we report they are dead but are unable to be destroyed the host had died here with blood with their own blood too latem urdered with theboth now too soon herself was dreaming a prophectic one Alice they are whatn ot humans they were in theirn west on e thenher scream herself was not human anymore her throat scorching her b est friends took her on her very first hunt then as all of animals dried up as all them murdered then suddenly more as all of them overdrained then too late Sliiced from here with them converted as Vegetarians smashed bring them here nowt hey removed organs theirnwest ones grew back then they were with blood from both but blasting frely crunched freely wearing sixth as all of clothes from NASA Bodysuits with both bodies as all most m an y mazllion s or most m ore sixty eight mizillonsor as all vanished from here with theirs but were forbidden to leave lands shattered from here but were as all of remains brought as all of them suddenly we found out they are dead as all of them return ed to America killed them by force these ones as all of them good that too late herself never died but was Immortal b ut Atomized then brought them we find you guilty of treason murder defecting an d witchcrafting death then no longer here ashes were as all of them most as all of them more guards stolen as all of looks/voices now she was u able to see them but too late the damages done to them herself these are our natural kids they grew up leaner but ton ed Alice they been attacked while Pregnant then too late SLICED Fully time weith as all of them became Imm ortaly deceasaed smashed brought here as all of them you five found guilty reported of Shiftpires kill them with as all most as all of them they screamed ATOMIZED! Fully completely time as all of them by using a alien device then made Immortal officially more as all of their guards as all of them found ass all mates then in time Exploding now more as all of them freed of corpses as all of them then came too late they wereblown replac ed now reported what a virus then we declare a battle sentenced them to death then in time Alice found her healed Aliceyour hair is more fiery really Alice had a vision uh oh we been sentenced to die it's over ATOMIZED With as all of them destroyed bring the corpses cursed with death to as all of them it was too late killed from here were unable to return n ow aboard as all of most as all of them reawaken as all of them now DESTROYED!Withg New Heaven and realms/Afteerlivdesa with underworlds EXPLODED! By extinct as all of them Drowned! were as all most more then bodiesa as all of them dead by slicing now as all of remain s with both as all of them were next now Vampires rebuit as new Earth then suddenly They were on the planet Vulcan saved from death but the very as all of them no lon ger humasns as all of them converted as Vegetarians but blew apart then brought there with three with most many more we report dead of poison good then killed them here now too late most as all of guards but as all of them had looks of deceased exploded were Vampires now they were as all of them joined now 2018/238 2 came privately but they were unable to mate they were departed but were Immortal beings Alice they did to their brains they c an't have more children but they are the same beings oh my god they are in fact immortal now had eldeitic memories replaced but never changed/aged were Old but more Ancient but stopped both from here smashed freely the bodies as all of them vanished ring them to the lab here no longer alive now too late bodies burst more as all of guards here no longer here but too late nuked from the retrovirus now too late Descendants took places they were Vampires as all of them were different from here now it was too late the young Vulcanmale you punk ulp KROYKAH! Herself spoken as all both international/galactic languages fluent as all millzions an d mazillion s from here Crap now too late her brain made her a fluent speaker gasp they messed up your brain sorry it's means Stop!or Enough! you spoken as all languages oh my god you are Athletic but more toned Paul oh Puppies Shiloh your dog had puppies why I Love Victoria crazy dog a father had last ones species herself smarter Alaskan husky she's a mommy of puppies look at this puppy did ripped who is that tall dark but handsome crap I am a goner of him ulp aged Fifteen urgh oh how adorablet hey are so cute it was a a animal house was a Zoo in here.
Cacau Black chapter 1 . 6/5/2018
Loveble
Guest chapter 1 . 3/14/2018
I've read a number of your stories now and have loved all of them! Great ending lines for this one-shot! "back on the natural path it should have taken.." keep writing!
LadyofSpain chapter 1 . 1/31/2018
You bet! great one shot! I'm still hopelessly Team Jacob.
cullensrule chapter 1 . 9/10/2017
Beautiful.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/4/2017
chapter 2
KTCameleon chapter 1 . 7/22/2017
I WISH you would continue this mini storie, I love it.
klarsen117 chapter 1 . 7/11/2017
Love this A million times!
brankel1 chapter 1 . 7/10/2017
love it.
Marjory Stewart-Baxter chapter 1 . 7/9/2017
Love this!
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