this is really good! i hope it gets continued, it's rlly interesting. youre very good at describing details, and i like to see the different points of views from the characters!

There's another Lee that SHOULD have been here- and a very underrated one at that! William "Billy" Lee, Washington's personal assistant, the one that stood beside him through thick and thin. I get that Hamilton was made to honor non-whites in America, but shouldn't the spotlight at least spare some thought for the OGs?

Not to nitpick, but where's Joseph Plumb Martin? He wasn't featured in Hamilton, but he served under Hamilton at Yorktown, and without his journals, no historian would have known of these conditions, nor would ''Stay Alive" ever been created!

And what about Baron Friedrich Wilhelm von Steuben? The man may not have been a Lieutenant General, but he is the reason the Continental Army became a professional army and the reason for the outcome of the Battle of Monmouth (he was the one who first spotted the British arrival). Leaving him out of Valley Forge is the equivalent of leaving the spices out of fried chicken! He often brought his Italian Greyhound, Azor, everywhere, which could have been the reason for Eliza's relatively full belly (Italian Greyhounds have a high hunting drive). So go include the Baron!

Maybe you could also "guest-star" the Liberty's Kids crew in this too! Henri's antics could certainly work wonders here, as could Sarah's more Burr-like actions!

Where's Congress & Baron von Steuben?

One more thing, Maria Reynolds was much younger than Eliza in real life. But I get this is an AU.

Just one thing, you don't need to go into too much detail into a character's appearance, if we only see them for a second or two. Also Eliza seems a bit too old to be a five year old. But I'm not trying to flame. I really do love this story.

I just started reading this and it's pretty good, just a few things. Eliza acts much older than a four year old. More like a nine or ten year old. Her sisters too. Also Eliza is acting a bit OOC. I feel like her character would be opposed to fighting. But other than those things I like this story!

Quill, not quail. VERY nice, and the introduction went smashingly. I can't wait to see what comes next.
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wow, I love the craftsmanship and commitment you must have put into this, it is extremely well done.

Man, I know I said it before, but the way you write is amazing!

Moana? (O)

I absolutely love your writing style!

In real life, Philip Schuyler has sons. Many of them, in fact. Hamilton doesn’t tell the whole truth...

O my god thank you for this. i missed youuuu

To correct a mistake I made, the college age back then was 15-17, so your timeline for Eliza's "joining the military" wasn't at all wrong. Still, it would have been interesting to see that part of her life...
Sorry for the mistake I made in my last comment!