| Reviews for For Albion, We Fight |
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  Guest chapter 19 . 5/22/2019 my point in asking gently for the rewrite is...You change Kaia too much its totally different person from the fisrt story its not the peson we fell in love it was...terrible |
| Guest chapter 19 . 5/22/2019 but one thing I really love it - the happy ending Maintain the happy ending Its warm my heart |
| Guest chapter 19 . 5/22/2019 look...i fell in love with arthur and kaia in the first book of this story...but this book "For Albion, We Fight"...it feel rush. Not so complex as the first one. You really can't feel the love beetwen the characters. PLease, rewrite this story (just this second one), tale more time, like with this Once and Future Queen, make we fall in love all again, make and show the love, affection beetween Arthur and Kaia, the trust. Some actitudes, some jeaulosy, like love one in determinate color, the banter, gestures, like tenderness in the hair, more time spent in bed, conversations and looks. PLEASE REWRITE this story - For Albion, We Fight Make justice for the Once and Future Queen Is my favorite story ArthurxOC it make me fall in love with it I read and re-read many times this story...and i can't like |
 Phoenix-Rising29 chapter 19 . 3/20/2019 I didn’t enjoy this story as much as I enjoyed your first. Things were just too different for my liking and I feel like Kaia wasn’t the same. Yes, she went through changes as all good characters should, but I fell out of love with her and Arthur. However, this was still a good story and you told your own story set within the rough world of Merlin and Camelot and the legend of King Arthur and that’s no small feat. So, while I didn’t enjoy it or the ending, congratulations on writing such a good story! |
| Annoymous chapter 17 . 11/25/2018 Keep going! I love this story! All my favorites and on the path of light- we need some good endings in our fantasy! People want it to be darker or more realistic- they’re jerks. Some of us live in hell and torment. The happiness found in a literary escape means the world. Thank you! |
| FxnFandxm.mp4 chapter 17 . 11/9/2018 Please please please please update soon |
| hateme101 chapter 17 . 8/5/2018 wow i did not see that coming |
| Arianna Le Fay chapter 16 . 8/4/2018 I dont understand why is edmund arthur heir when he has already a son mordred the true heir to camelot |
| hateme101 chapter 16 . 8/3/2018 love it |
| Leemi chapter 14 . 7/30/2018 Evocative, inspirational and brilliantly imaginative. It was a true blessing to read both this and the prequel. Thank you ever much for sharing :) |
| Arianna Le Fay chapter 14 . 7/24/2018 why cant kaia child be twins a boy and a girl :D |
| hateme101 chapter 14 . 7/23/2018 love it |
| CrystalVixen93 chapter 12 . 6/21/2018 Love your story and can't wait to see what happens next so I hope you update again soon plz |
| Annoymous chapter 12 . 4/17/2018 Love this story, please continue it! |
| Tamara Potter 123 chapter 7 . 4/14/2018 please update!I love this story so much! it's all I've been reading all day! |
