Loving this story - I wonder if it will turn out different to the original film

Ch 10 PLEASE LET THE TAIL FUN TO HEAL !PLEASE LET THE TAIL FUN TO HEAL ! PLEASE SAVE THE LEG ! PLEASE SAVE THE LEG! NOT PREPARED FOR THE QEEN . Village confusion. Update PLEASE . SAVE THE LEG AND THE TAIL FIN !

Ch 9 Infection? NIGHT FURY SALVIA COAGULANT STERELISER ,ACCELERATE HEALING. WELL SNOTY NOT EXACTLY HURTLESS but still friends.

CH 8 Nah It is fine . Faster the better. Now Is the Armoury Leggings Armoury, Boots Armour , Saddles? Weapons. Draconese language lessons. Hopefully soon .

CH 7 I forgive Tufnut even he is creative But I leave the mark of the Dust on Ruf and Snot .

DUN DUN DUN! - I appear to be reading these backwards

I like you style of writing!
It reminds me of my writing
I think if I was ever to write fanfics, my writing would be very similar to this
Loving the story

CH 5 MY accusing finger fully forgives that in the past Fishlegs. (Hug)

The Night Fury Salvia could show it's magic but ... not yet .

Well Snoty I WILL WATCH you as a target.

Ch 4 SNOTLOUT , TWINS RUFNUT AND TUFNUT , ASTRID AND FISHLEGS :/

SNOTLOUT you were jealous for the inventiveness and creativity and smarts as ALSO YOU RUF AND TUF . I RESEARCHED , I REMEMBER AND WAS DISSAPOITED TO THE POINT TO OBSERVE MOSTLY WHEN HICCUP LEAVES THAT HELL HOLE AND EVEN KILLS YOU SNOTLOUT AND BREAKS ASTRID WITH THE BITTER TRUTH OF THE REVELATION IN THE FINAL SNAP !

But you HAVE REGRET AND GUILT FOR WHAT YOU HAD DONE SO MY VERDICT IS ... MERCY AND FORGIVENESS. ... (friendly hug)

Fishlegs you abandoned fellow brain and FRIEND TO SAVE YOUR HIDE . YOU HAVE LESS GUILT ,MAYBE. BUT BEING SO OPEN I Forgive you as well . Just try to be brave and strong but keep your mercy . Just train more and be you , Use your knowledge .

Astrid I Remember what you had didn't partly but could done.

I Don't give undeserved MERCY very easily. Just who deserve TO BE SAVED .

I WILL WATCH AND JUDGE !

Ch 2

Aww Cute . So what if Stoic was the SHITIEST FATHER OF THE YEAR ! FINALLY HE BECOMES TO BE A DAMN REAL FATHER . NO MATTER IF STOIC IS OC .
FINALLY STOIC IS A REAL CARING PERSON FATHER. AND THE MONSTROUS NIGHTMARE AND TOOTHLESS THE NIGHT FURY ARE BECOMING ALLIES ! THAT IS GREAT ! ;,)

This story looks good so far I can not wait to see what you have next also how will Astrid and hiccup fall in love and what will everyone else on jerk thinks

I like this, it looks pretty good so far. You have an interesting and different way to befriend the dragons here, I am looking forward to seeing how this progresses.

Nice work. This is very interesting and heartwarming. It captures the mood of HTTYD. Even with a few easy to fix spelling errors, this was incredible and had me enthralled.