| Reviews for In A Darker World |
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   ChronoMitsurugi chapter 28 . 6h This really is a nice story. Im enjoying reading it much more than i thought i would. Though I am a little upset about Ty Lee's situation. I cant help it, she is cute enough to set off that little part in every man's brain for PROTECC despite the fact i actually prefer Mai. Kaito and the Gaang however, are always a treat to observe. Such wonderful interactions. Their scenes are the best of the story by far. So far i believe the ONLY part of this story i dont like is Peter. And yes, that includes Gorou The Hypocrite. I liked him better when he was Tom-Tom. And just Mai's brother. Not another person like Kaito. Anyway, fantastic story and I cant wait to read more. Thanks for sharing. |
| Odeveca chapter 17 . 7/28 I am certain that Mai and Kaito are on the same wavelength ha get it |
| Odeveca chapter 15 . 7/28 oh man they dipped without a normal Azula, she is so pissed I can feel it, great work on this chapter |
| Odeveca chapter 14 . 7/28 Pirate Kaito this is too cool |
| Odeveca chapter 13 . 7/28 Mai and Kaito... I like it |
| Odeveca chapter 12 . 7/28 that was very interesting turn of events... line dropped |
| Odeveca chapter 11 . 7/28 i love the various POVs and how Kaito has affected those around him, love it |
| Odeveca chapter 10 . 7/28 oh man Kaito is going to try and find Azula's compassion, lord have mercy on the guy, he really tries he really does, he pretends to be going through the movments, but he has taken an active role in the game of avatar, well done |
| Odeveca chapter 9 . 7/28 too funny! |
| Odeveca chapter 8 . 7/28 wow he knows them very well |
| Odeveca chapter 6 . 7/27 what a very productive chapter, Kaito is really growing |
| Odeveca chapter 4 . 7/27 great chapter |
| Odeveca chapter 2 . 7/27 great great chapter you really introduced and solidified the characters |
| Odeveca chapter 1 . 7/27 great great Intro you really hooked the readers in this one |
| leeny len chapter 28 . 7/26 this is great, the gaang gonna meet up with the yakuzas. i wonder how that'll be hahaha |
