you need a proofreader, but this is great otherwise.

This story is actually interesting it's quite unique with a 'creation system' . Like it!

Please continue.

a question, will this new Seraph be based on Archibald? Because if he will create an angel with the ability to have the strength of 90,000 angels to fight the combined devil and fallen armies, then that angel will be far superior(higher) to Michael ... it is proven in dxd that the greater the amount of wings of an angel, the greater its strength ... is Archibald has 20 wings ... please reply me!

Warning: Archibald I drew Dxd fanon wiki! dxd . fa non . wi kia wi ki / Archibald

i like this fic! i hope u'll continue this fic! in my opinion, u must be very careful with word for Naruto because he's a literally a God, right? i hope u'll think my opinion. thanks! i'll wait next chap!

Well damn it the paperwork that comes with being Hokage can't compare to one that God has to deal with.

please continue

Please continue this story!
-Monkey Elder

I'm hooked.

Nice concept and quite interesting story you have here if i am to be honest, so dont take what i am going to say as me trying to put down your work, but the "game like" elements kind of ruin the storytelling.

Skil blabla A rank... skill something B rank, something something passive skill, then you have the hole Gabriel description thing, it feels like i am reading a RPG character sheet and skill trees tooltips, it completely ruins the storytelling and whatever immersion the reader may have, with a little bit of creativity there would be a hundred ways you could have given that information without making it like a excel spreadsheet.

Still using Gabriel description as an example, you don’t need to give all the info at once, could have made something among the lines of starting with Naruto saying “Ha Gabriel, the most beautiful angel, Everything alright?” or something along those lines and you would have covered Name, Race and Title, and you could do the same with the rest of the information about her, dispersing it through the chapter in the form of dialogs, interactions, thoughts etc, you just needed to be a bit creative about it, making it a spreadsheet only he can see and the slap all the info there feels lazy and unimaginative and breaks the story flow.

Anyway that is my honest opinion so don’t take this as me trying to put down you work or anything like that, and like I said I’m still interested in seeing how the story grows and how you tell it.

will their be a gacha and or custom sacred gear making machine... if so he could make a shadow sacred gear for eden to make her stronger and make her stealth a lot better. What abilites does he have as a god... and does he give blessings and place curses... will he get a brave saint set?... Will the brave saint sets come from a gacha? Are their any other gachas?

Is Naruto getting an angel harem or something? If so then no matter what happens, I dont care but please to the almighty first person to came up with anime that you dont add Asia or Rias. Even Xenovia too. Anyways if it is just a single pairing then NarutoxGabriel and if its an harem Naruto Harem: Edea, Gabriel, Serafall?, Tiamat and maybe fem Vali.

even though it didn't explain anything at all that was a great chapter can't wait for more

You can have Eden transformed into lucifer daughter and try to kill Kokabiel this would start a battle between the two factions and then the Seraphs attack them in the chaos of the moment

Well I'm absolutely loving what I've read so far. You sir, or madam, have not only chosen a path that I rarely see done, but you also have excellent writing skills! I can't wait to read what happens next.

Keep up the awesome work!