Reviews for In the Kingdom's Service |
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Chuggapyro chapter 57 . 7/23 This universe has alot of potential for exploration. The new vss/kingdoms service would have black ops side stories. Maybe an episodic spinoff of jaune's experiences as director? An out of the vault style of storytelling |
Aselo chapter 44 . 7/19 Omg get fucked VSS lmao |
Aselo chapter 26 . 7/19 Ciel's relationship with him so far is hilarious |
KingSparda chapter 39 . 7/14 Thought it was raven cause nobody else was in the room and the red flash was her taking her weapon out |
NlaEid chapter 56 . 7/4 Weaponized relics? I like it. Definitely better than the stuff in Vol7. Or when they killed her. |
NlaEid chapter 50 . 7/4 Vale Agency of Governing Intelligence Networks and Activities. |
gogo bananas chapter 1 . 7/3 homie a sequel to this would be absolutely fuckin lit. just sayin |
Teddy chapter 57 . 6/5 Another excellent finished story, you really are an excellent writer. I would have liked that at least Ciel had survived, the character I really liked and I saw her as a type of support as Glynda was for Ozpin or as Winter for Ironwood. I wish you could make a story where Jaune and Ciel could be a couple. RIP Ciel. : 'v |
thegr8est chapter 17 . 6/4 honestly I understand why you wrote him giving up the vss early in the story but it almost seems forced to me I love your writing and enjoy almost all of your work but I can't suspend my disbelief to the point that I believe jaune would be comfortable lying to oobleck and betraying vale for someone who he completely believes will kill him whenever she feels he would inconvenience her |
TheSlySage chapter 57 . 6/3 honestly one of the best I've ever read. |
gogo bananas chapter 12 . 5/31 this story was really good until he left vss. tbh that killed it for me. |
gogo bananas chapter 16 . 5/31 ok nah I'd just let her put a bullet in my head |
gogo bananas chapter 16 . 5/31 so funny and aggravating and good fuck my life |
TheSlySage chapter 57 . 5/28 loved the bit at the end.. |
TheSlySage chapter 51 . 5/28 is it bad that I want him to seduce emerald away from Cinder and marry her? cuz i do lol this undercover date is freaking cute. |