| Reviews for Project Mile Two |
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  Guest chapter 12 . 7/15/2019 Aoi was tried to - Aoi tried to (one thing missing is that there was no mention of them saving Aoi, girls being raped really pisses me off) they'd be - there'd be a quite voice - a quiet voice I'll best - I'd best |
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/15/2019 more of me then - more of me than causing Kuno coughed up - causing Kuno to cough up mange - manage |
| editing errors chapter 10 . 7/15/2019 ways of the polite society - ways of polite society but something on - put something on should we do accept - should we accept he attempted wear Ryoga down - he attempted to wear Ryoga down has repeatedly took taken - has repeatedly taken No go - Now go |
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/15/2019 other then - other than how this - how will this I was doing - I wasn't doing more perverted then - more perverted than |
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/15/2019 to for Ranma - for Ranma older then - older than |
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/15/2019 less then - less than |
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/15/2019 once and for then - once and for all |
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/15/2019 you then one - you the one "_Nabiki Tendo_" Seems like a formatting error |
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/15/2019 more then - more than |
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/15/2019 capitol - capital then she did - than she did |
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/15/2019 to Ranma here - to get Ranma here it's something - it has something (it's is most commonly a contraction if 'it is' so better to write it out to avoid reader confusion) |
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/15/2019 source of his boggle - source of his confusion boggle isn't normally used as a noun, and never in this context |
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/15/2019 then - than a mistake you made a few times |
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/14/2019 then - than a mistake you made a few times |
 Nysk chapter 1 . 11/28/2011 A shame that this story was stopped at such a pivotal moment! |
