I hope Trico will get better. Seeing him in pain makes my heart ache.

Good chapter. Though I think it would make reading much easier if there was more space between each paragraph like in the previous chapters.

Keep up the awesome work! I looking forward to see how everything will play out.

This is a great start. I can't wait to see where this is going!

I like it a lot, but instead of the mostly white thing, put little thing, or pet. Also, near the end, u put "ahone", instead of shone.