pls update! I love this story ️

Will the goblins be nice to harry for an alliance

Please update! I could see Harry givin Neville his parents back because he can minipulate magic.

Ok. I know you said you wanted help so please watch your tense and how some words go together. It doesn’t flow in some places due to that. I’m not trying to be mean and just trying to help.

taught not reached. This is a good story but could use some edits and grammar fixing.

Mine should be my. Otherwise you have a grammar issue

so is there gonna be no ron-bashing?

please, please, please write more.

Hi
The story-line is great. Please do upload chapters as I am very interested in the story.
Thanks and best of luck

Still hoping you will find a way to update! Ever thought about a beta? You seem like someone who really likes to write, but can’t because of circumstances. A beta might help.
Hope to hear from you soon!

what is with cliffhangers, people.

please, please, please, please give me an ending.
please.

Update this book soon

i would say, dark but not evil and misguided

I had to transfer this to a word document and edit this to read the first chapter. you have a decent idea, bad writing skills. which arnt all that bad if your in thigh school.

When is the next chapter coming i really enjoy this story