So beautiful! This went right to my heart XD You did an excellent job writing from that perspective; it gave a nice touch that echoed the series' first person narration ~

Awww, this was wonderful angst! (Yikes, dark sounding? XD)
The fact that this could very well fit in with the series makes it that much better.
I enjoyed this :)

I love this so much, and I think that you should continue it, if you wish to do so. It has so much potential. You clearly are very gifted at writing. Keep up the good work!