This story sounds interesting and really intriguing I hope to see this expanded upon more if you can, but I've been wondering for long time now why do you just start a story and just leave it after a couple of chapters?

If anything maybe you should set your stories up for adoption or something because there are a lot of good stories here just gathering dust and not finished theyre all good ideas, and have such fun concepts in them.

So anyways my question is why do you not continue or finish your stories, if you cannot why not try anything else to let it done by another?
Also why do you sometimes write a story from your vault for only a few, but not for all of them?

Anyways another new interesting story and chapter, I'm always up for some type moon, other than that are you on spacebattles? Please tell if you can, if message is alright?
Take care.

not bad at all. hmm, i do wonder if his own style of magic/magecraft will be water elemental so he can use the epic 'Purge' move from "Beet the Vandel Buster" via the 'Crown Shield' saiga. figured that using it on Brockton Bay's #1 healer would get rid of her building addiction along with the lung cancer patients(with a tarp on the walls, no one doesn't want the walls stained deep black with the tar). hope this will help. looking forward to more. until then, later!

More!

More Fuu action!

More please

You forgot the most important line for Fou.

“Die, Merlin! Foooou!

Since it wasn't Mordred, my first instinct is Saber Lily or maybe even Le Fey. As if there isn't enough Sabers running amok.

It would actually make more sense if Eric could shape-change the shield into other types of shields(kite, buckler, tower, etc.) while retaining the same level of performance and weight.

Dick wizards gonna be dick wizards. Also, it was bound to happen, Merlin takes far too much enjoyment messing with people without thinking about the consequences(or simply because of the consequences) to care. That he's moonlighting as the parahuman version of himself just shows his vanity and Fuu could still be Taylor's faithful caninoid companion(Fuu could easily also be moonlighting as Taylor's pet dog/animal/thing she ran into when she was younger).

that was priceless at the end

Great job on this chapter!

Oh, Eric is about to be scolded for that comment isn't he?

Heh, definitely the best line to end on. Though I'm hopeful that some one recorded that and posted it on PHO. The lack of context might be a problem however. Still, even if Eric will get a "language" from the adults, I imagine that at least Fou would laugh his butt off. Doubly so if those on PHO saw it and start making theories on what Eric meant. At least two possible interpretations come to mind that I doubt Merlin would appreciate. Probably.

Anyway, I imagine Galahad had a point. If some one manages to bumble their way through an act of heroism, then they are unlikely to get the respect of a warrior. Vash the Stampede comes to mind, but that's assuming the Knights would not see through Vash's act.

The only thing I can think of is Sarah and carol desended from pendragon line or one of the others.

The only thing that I could think of saying after confirming that it is that Merlin is asking if Zelretch is in this world (and if there are others like Dead Apostle Ancestor and TYPE)...

Can't wait for part 3. If there ever is one.

HAH! Love primate murders little form smashing Merlin to the ground.