Reviews for Traveling the Multiverse
Deathreaper355 chapter 10 . 5/14
If possible could you type a chart of which universes are which because I've lost track of some of them
Yaknow WhatIming chapter 21 . 4/20
I also forgot to say, I know these are alternate universes and I like an OOC character that's different from canon as much as the next person but in some of these chapters, like chapter 21 for example, the way Grey treated Juvia and the fact that Gajeel tried beating Levy up again is just irrational and don't even get me started on Laxus and the others ganging up on Mira. With how drawn out some of these beatings are that Natsu and even his mates does makes me hate them even more.

Natsu's fellow guild mates were simply laughing at him when Makarov kicked him out? Like I said before, Irrational, Levy also pissed off Gajeel because SHE HIT HIM FIRST, also, if Levy Punched Gajeel hard enough to have him "reeling backwards" as you put it, she would have broken her hand since she's punching Gajeel's face which is no different than punching solid metal and yet she didn't get injured at all, I also don't think Gajeel is hot headed enough to react like that over a punch from someone of Levy's stature.

To be completely honest with you here, I feel like Laxus and all the other dicks were better off being killed by Natsu but no, it was drawn out and annoying, the whole time I'm reading this I'm just like "Kill them already! Why are you talking yourself up and drawing it out!".

There was a similar chapter that "TheUnknownLegion" did where Natsu not only got kicked out of the guild by not just Makarov but everyone and he got beaten up too, when the Alternate E.N.D. found out about this, he wasted no time at all and massacred the whole guild, it was so bad that even the whole town of Magnolia got destroyed along with it, I was hoping Natsu here would do somewhat of the same to these OOC assholes in the guild, less talking, more killing. O well, until next time.
Yaknow WhatIming chapter 35 . 4/20
I'm really tired of this mary sue esque Natsu that get's a harem of women and all that shit, I'm burned out on it, I was really into a similar fanfic that "TheUnknownLegion" did but after awhile I got turned off with how the story seemed to be more centered around Natsu rather than alternate universes

Also, the way you handled Natsumi in chapter 4 doesn't make a whole lot of sense, she willingly fucked a male version of herself just because he was strong? What happened to finding a mate for life? Isn't that what dragon slayers do at some point? The chapter ends with Gray saying he won't give up on trying to get Natsumi to be his wife and that he'll get stronger which is fine but it means that Natsumi wasn't series about finding a mate since her fuck session ended up being a 1 night stand and not out of love or anything.

Next, Natsu is a smug prick in this story, for example, when he says to gray after he punched him "Just so you know Grey... if I had gone dragon force with that, I would have killed you. So next time you talk shit, make sure you can back it up", I'll give you 1 thing here though, you've done a good job at creating a hateable character here, it made me want to see that version of Natsu get his ass kicked by a villain stronger than he is.

It just rubs me the wrong way, Natsu is basically stroking his own ego and it's pathetic, don't take this rant the wrong way, I still like the story don't get me wrong, I just hate how Natsu is somehow the focus point in all these "alternate universe fairy tail" fanfics.

Also, I think it would be interesting to incorporate other crazy universes like Bioshock, the flood and covenant from Halo, Star Wars just to name a few.
SSd chapter 35 . 2/24
Well written. Balancing everything and progressing stories. Hopefully we will get to read new ones soon.
jeremiahkelley93 chapter 35 . 2/5
great chapter.
natza chapter 35 . 2/4
Great chapter! I got really lost the first time I read through and I re-read the entire thing like 3 times so that i could finally understand what was happening haha
DragonHunter320 chapter 35 . 2/4
This chapter was both dark but yet so rewarding at the same time. I'm really freaking glad that the citizens of 8484-N were able to leave those Alvarez people entirely.

Also, this Romeo is a fucking bitch for what he did and I hope he get brutally dies in the future *laughs evilly* Though, all in all this was a fantastic chapter!
shadow465 chapter 35 . 2/4
Man I love it when I find one of your stories is updated. Now that I’m fully caught up I’m going back and rereading them all. But. I want moooore Dx. It’s so good. I wish I could just wipe my mind of this just so I can read it for the first time again
daniel2610994 chapter 35 . 2/4
Holy shit man that was real dark, but I am not surprised to hear it was thanks to unknown legion...every time you pick up one of his chapter it always turns out something really shitty happened...
And natsu finally got claimed by Bisca, now he will be real busy pleasuring all his new girls xD
Multiverse walker chapter 35 . 2/3
More of the eggheads I see. Could have called tgem scientists bu the name of the chapter they were introduced in sounded better. Anyway, great work man. The Alvarez soldiers hating their fellow corrupted soldiers is pretty cool, like there are soldiers who don't want to hurt civillians and then there are corrupted ones. Makes it obvious that what some want is power to do what they want. And 8484-N are safe(well, some of them). Good for them.
I wish you luck in writing your Gears/Mass Effect crossover. Then again, knowing you it is going to be awesome.
TheUnknownLegion chapter 35 . 2/3
I like it. I enjoyed seeing things go well. Gives me some new ideas for myself *laughs evilly*. Also liked the mention of Varolia, expect them to appear eventually once more in my stories.

Am a bit confused about when you mentioned Rosar and about him being weak without magic. Depending on the reality one's physical strength is not bound to their magical or other supernatural powers, so for one who comes from a world where this is the case they would still be able to say, throw a mountain like it was a baseball just fine still and overpower many others whose physical prowess are reliant on their Magic and other otherworldly abilities. I could have sworn I told you that at one point. But if I didn't then that's on me. Just figured I speak my thought about this, don't take it like you did anything wrong, you didn't, you didn't do wrong like how I did with that dark matter gun (haha). Since a lot of realities seems to work with their physical strength depending on their powers it would make sense that your characters would jump to that conclusion.

Sorry for the long talk, like I said this is more of a nitpick and not anything I'm actually confused and upset about. It was a great chapter like always! Way better than I could have ever done haha!
Donthedarkdragon26 chapter 34 . 7/21/2019
hahahaha glad to see another amazing chapter. congrats on moving and such. . now theres no need to wait months to update your stories yes? *has evil aura of menacing death behind me* Steady continuous updates are good.
EtheriousLogia chapter 34 . 7/21/2019
Hooray u update :)
Ushindeshi chapter 34 . 7/21/2019
Cool story. I hope Older Natsu's previous family and friends can escape from their conquer world.
natza chapter 34 . 7/20/2019
Great chapter as always! Can't waiy for the next one!

I wonder what Asuka's going to do to all the ladies in 137-F...

Think there's enough space for me im your new condo? Haha
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