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Please update

so, are you dead, or is this story dead?

can't wait for the next update

Great story so far, I look forward to seeing how it pans out, and who you pair Natsu with. With the way you started I would like to see Natsu and Brandish together, and Brandish leaving the Alvarez Empire. I look forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work. ~AlbusEques

This looks an interesting story! Are there any pairings? If you take suggestions then mine is for Natsu X small harem(Lucy, Erza, and Mirajane).

Finally a new non Nalu Natza Gratsu or OC story! Stories like these are hard to find nowadays. Great story btw.

This is a interesting story.
It been a while since I saw a fic about Natsu being the son of Mavis and Zeref, those fics and their theories died a long time ago since the revelations of the manga proving most wrong.

Hmmm so Natsu hair color is a mixture of black and blonde is not is iconic salmon hair, but makes sense, it would be pretty weird if he gets pink hair while his father and mother had black and blonde colored hair respectively..

Okay Natsu had his Dragon Slayer magic along with illusion magic that he inherited from his mother along with the Fairy Glitter mark, wonder if he got any magic from Zeref or if he got some of the Immortality his parents have.

A nice twist introducing Wendy so early along with her being strong and capable, she did fight some thugs without getting scared.
The same with Brandish she will basically become Natsu shadow, seeing how his life turn out to be.
Curious about the pairing for this story a NatsuxMira or NatsuxUltear would be interesting, but had to wait and read.

Look forward to reading how more interesting this story get.

Until the next chapter.

PS. Yeah despite all the disappointing stuff and moments that happened in the manga, Fairy Tail will always be on our hearts, only one chapter left, I assume that it will be the chapter all shippers are waiting for, to see if they pairing become canon.
I don't really care since my NatsuxErza or NatsuxMira ships will never happen, not really looking forward to that..
At least I will see Irene in the anime, since it was confirmed that the last season will be broadcasted on 2018.