Ok so it turns out you cant review a chapter that you have already reviewed and I cant seem to find how to remove my old review so ill just past my new one here
Review of chapter 1:
"Just read the first chapter re-write and gotta say, its pretty damn good. The way you set up Alexes latent pokephilia is great. I really don't remember the old first chapter anymore so cant compare them properly."
Review of chapter 2:
"GOOD SHIT MAN! But to be a bit more serious here, just like the rest its wonderfully written."

Ok so like always the writing is amazing, however this kind of stuff is such a turnoff for me that it was hard to read at times.
BUT I did read it and I'm looking forward to future chapters all the same

Mate this a fantastic piece of work please continue it ok

Wholesome sex with cuddling is the best UwU.
Good chapter, nice to see you back

At that moment it would have been a bat to the head

This is an incredibly well written story. I'm very excited for the next chapter to come out!

Honestly, the way that you write sex scenes is absolutely godly, and the recent ones have been some of the best stuff I've read on this site. I love that you're not afraid to beat around the bush when it comes to wordplay, since a lot of erotica writers seem to avoid common terms like butthole. Might be a weird thing to say - but it's true! In general, each encounter has been unique and memorable, and I'm confident you can keep it up! I think its because you're catering to different tastes with each scene, with stuff like the footjob on Kelvin, Miss Wisteria's dominatrix vibe with tentacles, etc. I can't wait to read even crazier scenarios in the future. This story is a gem!

Nice.

Sniveys are just the best. if I remember ill leave a more detailed review later.

You should enjoy more "you" time. I can understand the stuff that's happening in your life, and I'm happy that you managed to crank out a new chapter, but just take it easy.

With sincere regards~ Blue Dragon 77

You should enjoy more "you" time. I can understand the stuff that's happening in your life, and I'm happy that you managed to crank out a new chapter, but just take it easy.

With sincere regards~ Blue Dragon 77

Was really hoping for a Valentines chapter.

Damn, this a hell of a story. I can’t believe how well you created it, even if it was only 14 chapters at the point that I’m posting this. I honestly think that you are an amazing author, and I really liked how you composed your story. Even if I barely started reading it today, it had me captivated at the first chapter, and I was enthralled reading the rest until the end. The amount of detail input into every scene and the depth in the personality of each character was mind-blowing, and I’m grateful that you put effort into making this unique fic a fabulous one as well.

Cheers to an exceptional masterpiece!
-ThePokemaster

Was kind of hoping you'd do a Halloween one where he does Dark and/or Ghost types. Please update soon.

Man... Always good to read back up on the good old raunchy sex. Glad to see you back at it Sugarstep.