I enjoyed reading this, its not too often you come across decent Arkos gamer fics. I hope you continue this soon!

As a fellow writer who absolutely despises ntr and Pyrrha cucking Jaune stories and art I see where you’re coming from. I also see how you lost steam with rwby after volumes 4 and 5. What I can say is that though I personally HATE how rwby is now handled, I still love the world. And though the show may be mediocre at best now, the fandom toxic as all hell, I won’t give up writing my favorite anime world. Things happen but what I can say is that when the trolls and flamers get at you just keep moving. Though I won’t deny they made me stop writing a story I was writing I never stopped another

still a great read and i hope to see a return to your story

Um, did Jaune release...inside? Without a condom? Females birth control isn’t 100%.
I’m guessing for plot reasons they wouldn’t end up with a kid from this. It might be a funny side story or ongoing omake if it did though.

*There was more than desire, more than lust, and even more than lust in that moment.*

Did you mean to mention "lust" twice or was the last one supposed to be "love" as they reached a state of being beyond human comprehension or vocabulary?

Like trying to describe a sunset to someone who is blind?

- Plothole
Uhm. The following two sentences don't mix.

*You're my angel, but it's a mother's job and privilege to worry about her only child."*

*Uncles, cousins, and even her nephews were more attached to the fame of the Invincible Girl than to Pyrrha Nikos; their own flesh and blood.*

How can she have nephews, if she's an only child?

While it's unlikely that you'll come back to this, as your sometime collaborator "Dread Knight N7", seems to have disappeared from the site as well. (Cut and pasted the name, no hits in the search option. So either he changed his name or his account got nuked by an Admin/Mod.)

Plus, there's the issue of you being several chapters in.

I do have to express my opinion, that I believe Jaune made a mistake in this chapter.

Rather than going to Beacon, he should've picked attending a Combat School, Sanctum in particular.

Number of reasons.
A) Seeing Pyrrha again, as that was her school prior to Beacon.

B) Being her "childhood" friend who was there, when everyone else was either jealous or a sycophant. (Less lonely Pyrrha is a happy Pyrrha.)

C) Set up for a romance by admitting that he's attracted to her, but that she needs a friend more than a BF and that he's willing to leave the direction of their relationship in her hands. (Which would've been an amusing situation for when his Pyrrha assumed direct control and suddenly got an influx of happy memories starring Jaune from her new past. Would've further cemented the idea in her mind that he was her "The One".)

D) Would've prevented the transcripts issue.

E) He'd be less under levelled compared to his peers and able to get his skills and stats (grind grind grind, including shooting things, to help with that stat to move it to a neutral/average position.) up to snuff.

Hell, he might've been able to reach his Semblance prereqs if he'd gone to Sanctum.

Even if you had decided to timeskip past it. *shrugs*

Still, what is done is done.

Do hope that I'm wrong and that you'll return to this story some day or let someone else adopt it, but we'll have to wait and see what the future brings us

This was good, regardless of whether or not you come back to this please know that this was really well done

Yang's fight at Juniors club does not happen until after the events of volume one. It takes place between volumes one and two. It takes place after volume one, but before volume two. Also, continue this story already. It's been nearly a year.

Won't Blake be able to hear them on their roof muuuch easier than Cardin could?

This is the reason why I never actually use any sort of social networking for my hobbies of reading/watching/listening. People in general are far too 'vocal' with their opinions and believe they have the right to shove said opinion down other people's throat. I have literally never once actually made an account on any sort of forum/Discord/etc for 'discussing' anime/shows/movies/music/books/manga/etc simply because people's "opinions" are like a disease that clings to you and you can't just 'wash it off' once you come into contact. No the only way is to burn it with liberal use of flames. Yang would be proud of that one. Or angry for trying to steal her schtick.

Hi. I’m a bit late, but I just want to say that I love your story, and I love Jaune and Pyrrha together. Thank you for writing scenes that me gooey inside.

Hope you come back to this soon!

Oh well, it was good while it lasted. Thank you for writing up to this point. I'm sorry on the behalf of those that aren't complete idiots, I'm certain that I and those alike would not want to see this go. As you've said, there is a lot of toxicity, but caring about it doesn't really help, they won't stop being idiots. However, I understand that it can really ruin the mood even if you don't honestly care that much. From the little I've had the pleasure of experiencing, I can say that this is a good story, despite its faults like any story.

You've done good. I hope you have a good day, and that many like follows.

This is just a quick question while I'm still reading this good shit, the hell does Landarkos stand for? I mean, arkos is JaunexPyrrha I think. But what is the land part for? Does Landarkos simply mean jaunexPyrrhaxRubyxBlake?