Hi. I think your story is amazing. I love how you focus on the relationship growth and character developments of everyone. I have never read an Izuku x Tooru fanfic before, and I have to say you are getting me hooked to the pairing. I think your writing is really good and flows very nicely. You really know the characters well and it reflects in the fic with how everybody feels exactly as they do from the manga/anime.

I think my favorite part is how you decided to focus on Izuku's struggles with becoming close to a girl like Tooru. I really enjoy how you took into account his anxiety towards girls (people really) and making friends in general and connected that with the slow development of their relationship. It's so realistic and well thought out. Also, I really enjoy your characterization of Tooru. As you've said, she is more like a background character for more comedic purposes in the canon-verse, so we don't see as much of her character - which is why I enjoy how you decided to take what was there, and construct a lot more complicated and nuanced person - I'm only on chapter 9 but still!

Lastly, I just wanna take a moment to tell you I really admire your dedication towards this fic. I know it's been a good while since you wrote chapter 9 and now you're already on chapter 41 (so your person/attitude might have changed towards this fic and fandom in general) but just from your earlier chapters, it seems like you have a great passion for writing this fic (writing in general too?). This story is really well planned and realistic, and I enjoy reading your author notes with all of your thoughts, opinions, and reasons for why you wrote this that way or included such and such. I dunno. I've read a lot of novel-length fics from other passionate authors, but for this fic, I just really appreciate the time you take to write out the words you give us.

Anyway, I'm so looking forward to reading and enjoying the rest of this. As of now, I can imagine what an ending this story will have but regardless, I sure hope I can someday read the conclusion of this awesome story so good luck writing!

Iida and Izuku are such dorks lol I love it

I'm loving this story so far. Hope it continues!

CUTE

Leave it to the Vigilante to have connections, lol. Just caught up on the last three chapters and it was very action packed. Internships sounded fun, and seems like our kids learned a lot from a variety of top-tier heroes.

God I'm a sucker for this shit. I hate that I am, but I also love it. You're too good at this man, I'm almost pissed at you for the slow updates, but I know tht I can't.

Can’t wait for you to post the next chapter to this amazing fanfiction!

Amby Valkrine, I know I could just pm him, but I wanted to address it where everyone could see. That way no ones turned off of the story from just a review. In regards to a pairing just because two characters dont seem similar does not mean they wouldn't ship well. One of the best ships in my personal opinion, Mina x Izuku. Their practically complete opposites, but sometimes that just means they balance the others character. Sorry for the rant, but thought someone should address that.

When he punches the dummy in this chapter you described it as the punch hit with full power. Do you mean his 5% or his actual full power. I assume it's the former but I just wanted to double check. Kudos and keep on writing!

Here's a tip. If you are writing one of the characters remembering a line someone else said put it in quotation marks and italics. It's easier to recognize as a mini flashback so to speak. Kudos and keep on writing!

I was really happy to see this updated, I really like how you've done the pairing of Izuku and Tooru. Her character in this is very interesting and believable and their relationship makes a lot of sense. Keep up the good work and stay safe.

noce

foi bom

Great chapters! I hope she and her mom can make up soon.

Pretty good read, but stopping here. I was interested In how you would have an invisible girl pair up with midoriya, and you did a great job convincing me of that, but some of the other relationships dont really make sense at all. Ida and Uraraka was acceptable, but still iffy since they didn't seem very compatible nor really similar in any ways, but the main problem was mashiro and momo is a big no. I dont get this ship at all, nor having everyone in that group be dating each other, but not only are they basically polar opposites, but it doesnt really make sense at all story wise, I dont even recall them interacting once in the manga. It would be like shipping Bakugo and Tooru, which dont fit each other whatsoever. Other than those main gripes, great read in general for tooru x midoriya.