I love the parallels you made here. their destinies bound from the start. I don't care how short the chaps are but I care because they hold substance. you're very talented writer and if you write more, I will read them.

This is very interesting. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

loved it wish tthe chapters were longer lol look forward to more!

loved it! look forward to more!

Oh my gosh,, I swear I love your writing! From one author to another,, I am honestly starstruck. I love the idea and hope to see more. :D