Reviews for Ash Betrayed |
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Drifting is Bliss chapter 2 . 5/28 It always sounds weird when someone actually write the pokemon speaking, so instead of using the common 'Pika, pikachu!' maybe use it like: 'Pikachu would call a quick reply' or something of the sort. |
ichika aono chapter 1 . 1/20 Man of all the jobs researcher was their choice. Honestly I kinda felt they should have at least suggest frontier brain. After all he was offered the job before. |
Guest chapter 5 . 1/13 Please fix this chapter it's full of text symbols which makes it unreadable right now |
Northstar Pokeshipper chapter 5 . 1/14 Lillie, not Lily. And welcome back! |
Yaw6113 chapter 5 . 1/13 Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot. |
thor94 chapter 1 . 1/13 ask why delia done this? Because like some betrayl fics, she doesn't want her name and reputation to be linked to a loser. Or she purposely use the usual betrayal fanfic cliché to her advantage. Means she know that the only way for her anime canon son, stop to be the pathetic loser repeating the same dumb mistakes and brain reseted each region is to betray him. |
d.felipe76 chapter 5 . 1/13 you may want to repost this chapter |
sheriff11 chapter 5 . 1/13 Chapter format is messed up making it impossible to read |
Yaw613 chapter 5 . 8/22/2019 Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot. |
Ganzademon chapter 5 . 1/2/2019 Can't wait for the next chapter and more please update soon love this story |
uknown chapter 5 . 10/30/2018 wow how you holding up after that exam anyways your right and always be waiting for your next update see you in your next update peace out. |
TechnoGalen chapter 5 . 8/13/2018 Liking Kishimoto's crap, no wonder this is garbage itself. |
Littleboi chapter 5 . 7/6/2018 Nice story, hope you can get back to writing soon! |
Werewingwolfxx chapter 5 . 5/13/2018 Thank you for the explanation I can wait for new chapters |
Andrew chapter 4 . 3/4/2018 So this will be an Ash/Leaf fix or furthership..But Sawyer trying to make a move? Hmm. Wonder how that will turn out. I do hope there is more interaction between Ash and Leaf, Sawyer seemed over exuberant in the chapter, least what I remember haha. Hope you the best with school and all! |