Reviews for Promise of the Night
KJox5 chapter 34 . 6/28
That. Was. Awesome!:)) I can’t wait till the sequel of it!
Carlisle Fan 22 chapter 33 . 6/26
Oh wow this was a rush of emotion! I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Goddess Nefertari 19 chapter 33 . 6/25
All i can say for this whole chapter is oh snap to every scene great job i was expecting that last scene at the end. But all the same great chapter cant wait for the battle. And how you describe general Brutus es facial expressions when he first sees goth lol. Its gonna be good!
KJox5 chapter 33 . 6/25
.Goodness! I nearly bit off my finger! After that!
I can’t wait till chapter 34
gemm1mt chapter 32 . 6/12
Jesus Christ shuts getting real.
KJox5 chapter 31 . 2/23
Oh fudge! I nearly had a heart attack! God, I hope they have a plan or else we (they) all gonna die!
I can’t wait till chapter 32
Carlisle Fan 22 chapter 30 . 2/15
Oh that's cool he has an Uncle Hector. And his dad's name is Plato.

And I think it's cool that Mercury has a male mate. It's very sweet.

And I'm glad that Orestes is going to find Shade and Marina. Hey he should be able to spot Vanessa too and then he can give her a lift to Hibernaculum. With his wings, he should be able to catch up to Shade and Marina in no time.
FirecrackerWolf chapter 30 . 2/15
I'm not gonna lie this by far the best chapter you wrote on here so far! I just love how you made Plato and Hector twins and this honest to god made me laugh so hard XD
Also, I love how you did something different by making Mercury and Icarus mates and I never would've thought of something as good as this!
KJox5 chapter 30 . 2/15
Wait,wait,wait...What! That’s how it goes! The main heroes go together. Not two go on a journey while one Main hero stay behind of the story. They Go Together! TOGETHER!
I can’t wait till chapter 31
FirecrackerWolf chapter 29 . 1/28
Very nicely written, I can’t wait to see what chapter 30 holds
Carlisle Fan 22 chapter 29 . 1/28
Aww poor Romules. I always liked him more than Remus. Thank goodness they treated Vanessa when they did. She's not wrong about getting blood poisoning from an infected wound. But now I wonder how are they going to transport her to Hibernaculum now with that infected arm? If Orestes was around, he could fly her there. Any way keep up the excellent work.
Zutara4everA chapter 28 . 1/26
love this story 3 is so exciting :D
Carlisle Fan 22 chapter 28 . 1/25
Oh great it's King Crazy. I always liked his brother better. Keep up the excellent work.
FirecrackerWolf chapter 28 . 1/5
Very nice job with this chapter, can’t wait to read more
FirecrackerWolf chapter 27 . 12/31/2019
I love how you wrote this chapter. I especially love how in this chapter Marina and Orestes made a deal with Throbb that was basically the same as the deal Vanessa and Shade made with Goth
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