Reviews for Breaking the Silence
Agiani chapter 10 . 4/26
Fantastic!
Unslaadahsil chapter 1 . 2/23
heads up: Hawkmoth speech is stupid already in the cartoon, it becomes straight up idiotic when you try to put it down in a written story. most miraculous fanfic writers avois his little speech, and they're very much right in doing so.
And in general, unless the reason for the akuma is important to the plot, it's better to ignore it.
introvertedlover2 chapter 10 . 4/18/2019
the ending of the prologue tho XD
IamJaneen chapter 6 . 12/9/2018
Loved this story! I really liked that you showed how both characters saw through each other's "perfect" images and still liked what they saw and it helped bring them closer.
System11 chapter 10 . 10/26/2018
that was wonderful eeeep
BurgerBob chapter 10 . 7/22/2018
that was too gud
Guest chapter 9 . 6/14/2018
What does Fin have to do with anything?Are you watching Adventure Time, or are you talking about the fish part, or something I can't currently think of, or is it just a typo...
Guest chapter 7 . 6/14/2018
The presentation was in bold. That makes it seem like you want us to focus on the presentation. Also, nice job researching facts for a story, unless you already knew this, which I can appreciate.
Guest chapter 6 . 6/14/2018
I am be one of the people who knows what puce looks like. It was named after the color of a flea that was squashed after filling up on blood. Now that you know that information, the story is a bit funnier(at least when she turns puce). Although it makes me question the delicateness of the color.
Guest chapter 5 . 6/14/2018
I love Hawkmoth not even trying with the names, but I can think of 4 better names than Dumb Waiter... wait, there's actually such a thing as a dumb waiter. Now I can think of more, so 4 is the wrong number... OH ITS THE WRONG NUMBER, THE WRONG NUMBER SONG! WE'RE VERY VERY SORRY THAT WE GOT IT WRONG! Repeat until sufficiently stuck in your head. I need a life.
Guest chapter 3 . 6/14/2018
Sunshine is GOOOOOOOD! I personally prefer a light drizzle so I get wet but not soaked, but whatever.
No mercy chapter 3 . 6/14/2018
I know he calls her little lady in the English dub, but I think Princess better suits her. Plus, he could make it a pun, so it makes more sense for him, too.
No mercy chapter 2 . 6/14/2018
He flipping thought of Mari and Ladybug at the same time, and noticed they had a similar physical appearance. He is so oblivious. But then again, so is pretty much everyone, fictional or real. Even me sometimes, "the great and powerful Trixie!" Good job if you understand it, and no, I don't like the thing it's from.
No mercy chapter 1 . 6/14/2018
I thought the akumas would be used to the light by now if they were startled, a and they were bred to do that or something. I notice minor details in stories late at night, so I ask weird things in comments. Also late at night.
LadyPers chapter 10 . 12/12/2017
I loved everything about it! Especially the ending of the epilogue 3 I look forward to reading more of your works.
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