Reviews for Fairy Tail Minus One
Curse Of Kings chapter 1 . 6/25
Where did you give said thoughts?
EL MAGO INMORTAL chapter 1 . 6/20
Hola Evan Deivant, perdon pero hablo español jeje, quería pedirte tu permiso para poder traducir tu historia a español, acá también hay lectores que hablan español que quieren ver tu historia traducida a nuestro idioma. Estará subido en Watppad, claro si es que me das tu permiso :3
Guest chapter 28 . 6/6
keep it up bro, and stay safe from the covid 19
khaihoang123 chapter 28 . 5/30
Thank for new chapter! It's raining tonight. I am lying and reading great stories. Another incredible chapter as always.
You has written 28 chapters. I really hope that's something that happens in Fairy Tail one day.
Linda Lockser and Erenjack Redfox are a couple. In manga, Juvia was asked Makarov whether Gajeel join Fairy Tail Guild, I like it. Juvia doesn't ask for Element 4, but for Gajeel.
Are Rick and Eric in your chapter as strong as Sting and Rouge? Drangon Dou fight with black and white light.
Who will Anna get marry to in the future?
A little romance makes the story more interesting!
Do you write a love story's dragons?
Just wanna say I just love the way your story's going.I've never come across a fanfic like your that focuses on world keep up the good work.
Hope new chapter!
khaihoang123 chapter 27 . 5/18
Thank for new chapter! Today is busy Monday. It's nice to have new stories to read for relaxing.
The big battle between the Tartarus Army and Irene and the comrades begins. It's exciting.
I like reading the battle's Belserion. Belseion is a dragon with potential development. He was few introduction so you can write yours Belserion's story. In manga, Igneel is focused too much. Except strength, Why does Igneel fight for humanity? Dragons: Weislogia, Skiadrum, Grandeeney, Metalicana need their development.
Anna will be heartbroken in Arc... Victor start a fight with Kyouka and Anna will put down the war?
So much for the sequel ever happening at all. Had so many good moment to do for the end of the first story still.
Anyways, this is a really awesome story and I look forward for the next chapter.
khaihoang123 chapter 26 . 5/9
Thank for new chapter! We have a long chapter!
I don't like torture of Erza and Kyouka. This is a dark scene in Fairy Tail. Kyouka like SM...
Zentopia Arc isn't in manga, hope for your connecting Zentopia Arc and the other family has a dark backstory, which related to Kyouka. I like Kyouka backstory.
Keep the good work up, since your enjoy this.
khaihoang123 chapter 25 . 4/25
Thank for new chapter! Wow, you wrote 4 chapters in week! How can you quickly write long chapters? I read new chapter everyday.
I confuse Fairy 12 with 8 Original Dragon Slayers. Fairy 12 fight in arc Tartarus and 8 Original Dragon Slayers fight in arc Dragon War?
Father's Erza is hideous from the moment he appears. Except physical strength, Hope Erza is no much influenced into him... In manga, Who would be the king of Dragonv when Rung died?
Kyouka still like torturing, but she has a backstory.
Heartfilla also have dark sides. Lucy in manga has more fanservice.
Keep the good work up, since your enjoy this.
khaihoang123 chapter 22 . 4/18
Thank for new chapter! Interesting chapter after along time.
Fairy 12 is a good idea. In final arc, we don't have oppositive team which compare Sparrigan 12. Team Natsu are not strong enough to fight Sparrigan 12, Fairy Tail are not strong too. Hope to see more character development's Irene,especially on the psychological development. She was very nice. On the battle, she will see her enemies, will her eyes fill with hatred? or she will negotiate. Does Irene make friends with anyone without fight?
Ancestor's Mavis appears, Mavis is really a fairy.
Fairy 12 need teamwork. Except Irene, they did not pay attention to their teammate. What do you think?
P/s: 400 years ago, Irene: I will kill you,Brandman. Now, Irene: Long time to see Brandman...
Anyways, this is a really awesome story and I look forward for the next chapter.
khaihoang123 chapter 21 . 2/29
Thank for new chapter! Another incredible chapter as always.

Well, most members of Fairy Tail appears,except Thunder God Tribe, ancestor's Bisca Connell, Macao Conbolt, Mest Gryder... Ancestor of Sting, Rouge appears too, ancestors of Sabertooth's members: Minerva Orland, Rufus Lore, Orga Nanagear, Yukino Agria. We also have Lamia Scale, Blue Pegasus (if we appears, will we strong? In manga, we just for the sake of laughing), Mermaid Heel, Raven Tail, Oración Seis, Grimoire Heart. Hope to know more about them.

I like relationship of Gajeel and Juvia, when Juvia told Makarov whether Gajeel had been a member of Fairy Tail.

Knighwalker Clan does not appear in manga, you can unleash your creativity.

p/s: Do you like Irene's personality in manga? Do we see Irene and Erza reunion? Moon dragon is lovely.

This is a really awesome story and I look forward for the next chapter.
huese81 chapter 1 . 2/8
I'm glad to see that you were not dead, seriously for a good time I thought you would end up as wierdos and others, thanks for creating minus one :), you know I would like to know how to create power levels for my fairy tail fic, any advice ?
khaihoang123 chapter 20 . 2/7
Interesting chapter after along time.
Well, I think that Key to the Starry Sky Arc is more potential, you will have ideas for your story, especially for Anna's development character. By the way, have you some world building ideas for Kiana?
Past Tartarus Arc begins. We will see the power of Seilah (in manga, she isn't shown much), Kyouka (Will Irene fight with her?) and so on. Delioria also appeared (I miss Ur and Ultear more...)
Anyways, this is a really awesome story and I look forward for the next chapter
khaihoang123 chapter 19 . 12/11/2019
Thank for new chapter!
Good chapter with some nice world building and development for Irene's strength. I don't like that Irene and her friends are suddenly powerful in middle of battle.
Well, do you read latest chapter Fairy tail 100 years quest? I hope that the battle: Laxus vs Erza isn't interrupted. Erza has not new power, so bored!
Hope interesting chapter next time.
Bosma19 chapter 19 . 12/7/2019
I love this story but one point that really irritates me is that you always miss spell igneel name his name is igneel not ingneel
khaihoang123 chapter 18 . 9/27/2019
Thank for new chapter!
On Sunday, we will see last episode's Fairy tail series. Well, I think story's Acnologia on anime is simply. What do you think?
I thinked about Sasuke VS Itachi when I was reading Irene VS Altas Flames.
Hope interesting chapter next time.
darkmachines chapter 17 . 9/14/2019
Sorry, but are you going to force on Fairy Tail and not long Bleach/Naruto anymore?

Sorry just sad that the one story I enjoy the most in helping is just boring to you now.

So much for the sequel ever happening at all. Had so many good moment to do for the end of the first story still.

Anyway, good chapter, nice to see the Tartarus members too.
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