Reviews for The Spider
caedwards chapter 96 . 18h
Will apocalypse be in this given everything
Luna's Meow chapter 45 . 7/26
You're trying to wax philosophical, but the truth is much simpler.

You'll never get rid of crime. It's part of human nature.

Sure, there are people who "turn" to crime because they "feel" they have no other choice to meet some need or other. Most times this isn't true, and they just took an easy way out, but sometimes it is true. Okay, sure. Let's give those a pass.

The problem is that there will ALWAYS be those who seek to take advantage of others, who want to rule and dominate others, and who seek to use drugs - not even as an escape, just for "fun" because they have no purpose in life.

You can't fix humanity. No one can. Trying is a fool's errand.
Luna's Meow chapter 44 . 7/25
Seven Infinity Stones. Ego, the seventh stone. Nemesis.
Luna's Meow chapter 41 . 7/25
1. Why the hell is Peter keeping secrets from fellow heroes? Not telling them about Mephisto? Why? It's fine and makes perfect sense to hide shit from his family. Hiding stuff from fellow heroes is just retarded, and leads to them being underprepared. Stupidity of the highest order.

2. Riri? Really? The dumb bitch who stole a suit - no, she didn't figure it out - and had to INVENT racism and sexism because it wasn't there? She NEEDED to get told "you can't do X because you're a black woman" instead of just being happy that she was told she could do anything? Not a smart move. Also not smart making her Tony's kid. She, unlike Miles Morales, is pretty much universally hated for damn good reason - she's a cunt.

I get that you tried to "fix" her - but sometimes the best "fix" is to just delete bad sections. Just like when editing any other part of a story. Not every segment gets "rewritten" to fit properly. Some just need to be removed.
Shez chapter 96 . 7/25
I hope you're staying safe in the midst of the global pandemic and are taking care of everything you need to. I love your work and what you've done with this story and hope you continue writing and get back to updating this marvelous story at your own pace. Cheers!
Luna's Meow chapter 32 . 7/25
...The smoke must be hiding his sight? Man, you're bad at this. This isn't minecraft, he's not moving in relation to anything else. He is literally teleworking, and probably using hellpowers to do it. Demons are real in Marvel, he's probably just channeling brimstone and hellfire.
RandomCoolGuy chapter 1 . 7/24
luna's meow, i don't get why you are so sweaty over this. people make mistakes all the time. and you don't have to be angry, it's fiction for a reason. what ? you think magneto is real? then you can find him and shove your fucking reviews up his ass and delete your fucking profile. jesus the man's just doing what he likes. give em a break.
Luna's Meow chapter 23 . 7/24
...You know nothing about computers. If you suspect anything, you unplug the internet cable, turn off any wifi, and NOTHING ELSE. You LEAVE IT ON.
Luna's Meow chapter 10 . 7/24
Uh, fiber optics is light. Electricity isn't faster than light. Fibre isn't as fast as light in practice not because the light isn't that fast, but because it's processing so much at one time and your COMPUTER can't handle faster, and the speed is being split up between so many people on the fiber network.

Basically, Parker blood is not faster than Fibre Optics. Not possible by any kind of physics.
Luna's Meow chapter 12 . 7/24
...I'm wondering if you know how tech works. All digital power? ...Wow. That's... really bad. There's a plug. A battery, a plug, arc reactor... always a power source and a connection to it. Always.
Luna's Meow chapter 17 . 7/24
Ferrous or not is not at all what a "smart" person would think.

If MAGNETISM was Magneto's power, it would work on even non-ferrous materials. He isn't the master of magnetism, but is instead the master of a specific SUBTYPE of magnetism.
Luna's Meow chapter 9 . 7/24
SHIELD is not HYDRA. It has been INFILTRATED by HYDRA, but the vast . ajority of the people are still SHIELD.
hnh058513 chapter 20 . 7/23
Yellow Hazmat, also sounds like AIM
And no one comments on Loki's Eyes
hnh058513 chapter 19 . 7/23
Honestly at lot of it made me laugh, despite being under Thanos' control Loki both made sure that the murder he committed would be a rallying point, and allowed for the portal generator to be easy to deal with.

Also I think the reason Steve was rejected wasn't just his age and health, but that his mother died from TB, Steve was a potential carrier.

And Tony and his Ego, that always makes me laugh for several reasons, Nat technically isn't a licensed physiological profiler, she didn't bother to take into account the fact that him dying meant any observations made were useless as they wouldn't provide a base line, and with all comments about ego, it makes me suspect she may have already had preconceived ideas about him
hnh058513 chapter 7 . 7/23
Honestly it was that Line that really makes me love Tony Stark as a person, when Steve said take the armour away and what are you, and Tony responded with those 4 words instead of simply saying the Man who made the suit and could simply make another, it showed he was actually dismissing Steve by keeping to his public mask
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