Great chapter. Nice new twist.

Yes Lucy

just admit that you've abandoned this story and you're using the other one for more views because the wait between chapters is ridiculous when you can update your other one just fine. *lost a reader*

A great chapter. Glad you are back. Hope you give Mon-el heck.

Thanks

Really love this story so far, but I'm also really hoping this won't be karamel.. Keep it up tho :D

Is Sam/Reign in this story or will she be in the next story if so is she going to beat up both Kara and Deity?

your characters are flat and one dimensional, they're always running off a stereotype or the one personality trait you've given them, Deity is a straight up brat who doesn't learn and is very unlikeable, you've given her too many names to remember, and reading your crossovers you always make kara and your oc better than everyone else and have the ultimate say for a win. hell, have barry and the other be the hero for once. god!

Good chapter. Kara couldn't react any other way.

I just finished reading the whole fic until this chapter and i loved it!
this is the first review i leave,
Can't wait till the next chapter :)

Deity's white-hot rage was palpable here and tha's definitely something you'd want to get out of a character since you can't particulary 'watch' what's going on. So the return of Sim also brings back the return of the other Hyrbids as well as Indigo and Max Lord once more. Plenty of cliffhangers to keep things interesting as they go on and finally, the cat's out of the bag with Deity and Kara. There was only so long it could be kept secret.

Doomsday or Brainiac not Darkside I hope.

i've read all of the crossover bits, they still tend to focus on kara and deity. i understand if you want the promo but it's not much of a balanced crossover

Good chapter.

So Mirror master is in play in this story cool.