This story is too spuratic and lost with no direction. Don't waste your time as you'll leave confused and wanting to read something else to make up for it.

Ch4 seems a repeat of ch 3

this was very acceptable :)

how did you learn Neville's birthday? I don't recall it mentioned in the books.

Will Harry ever tell Ron and Hermione about the werewolf bite and him being a werewolf now or will Hermione figure it out on her on with how clever she is?

I love the way Harry cut off Dobby and made him understand what was needed

Awesome job! I've been looking forward to reading this.

u did good on this

Personally I think you should have made him a vampire but that's just me

I love this so far also to the amazing person who wright this it the person you were talking to about the story sorry about that my computer is being stupid hope we can talk again I love your story