pffft- HAHAHAHAHA. Law's reaction is always amusing ,, xDD

thanks for the chapterts looking good

I don't care if your writing SI content. I think it's an acceptable medium to pour your feelings out and maybe even do a little bit of wish fulfillment at the side, but 3 request before starting your journey is generous in my opinion. I'm not even commenting on the fact that you used them correctly or not, I would make dumb snap decisions too on what my wish would be like. No, this chapter is just a little rushed. I don't know if anyone else thought that but here's my opinion why, emphasis on MY. But what you did is pretty shitty, to Law and to your MC, because instead of them just resolving it by just talking it out maybe for 2 to 3 chapters with Actual character development, you stunt them by just adding TRAUMA, and DRAMA to keep it "interesting". You rushed it so much and I felt cheated Because you rushed it. I mean, hear this "Yes Law was cranky today because he doesn't have enough sleepMC is hurt by a passing comment and the reason is established JUST a few paragraphs above so you could understandMC observation Haki Not Found is CONVENIENTLY explained via emotionally compromised, when was it explained? just a few seconds before she was knocked outholy... I'm going to give up writing more. I'm so tired l was going to give more as to WHY I feel this chapter is so rushed. I'm just too tired to do so and I'm sorry about that. I hope you continue writing, and Good luck.

Oh this story just cracks me up XD

Pleeeeeease update

I mean, she has mastered Observation haki but doesn't see a few bandits coming? alright, seems legit, especially in a world where killing intent is a thing and the bandits definitely should've projected some, which in turn would warn her of their presence, but sure give me an excuse, it's gonna be something like "she was sad from the rejection by Law" right? I mean, it's good to know that an eighteen year old girl that was described as a sadist in the first chapter becomes so wounded by the words of a child that she fails to pick up both killing intent and someone's presence when she's said to be a master of observation haki.

Holy fuck this is so cool

Fuck! Please continue. I'd be devestated if this was abandoned...despite the fact that you've updates this month... The thought just terrifies me. And I can't wait until She meets Luffy! Oh, and would she be paired with anyone?

Am I just iverky emotional or did I actually freaking cry from this chapter?

this is soo goodplease update this

i love this plz keep this up

update..

Can’t wait to read more!

You should continue this fic, is amazing!

Please update this book is really good