*updated 23h ago*
(Sharp inhale)
MY BODY IS READY !
YAS ! New chapter ! A welcomed surprise during such hard times. We finally got to see Link and Vah Medoh. Zelda next time? I can't wait !
Revali taking a nap up in the sky, dude is chill X3 poor Link, getting talked down like that. Will you change the story, now that Eva is included ? I can't imagine her all alone without Revali if he dies like it happened in game.
Keep up the good work ;3

HI WELCOME BACK

Im enjoying this so much; evangeline's and revali's relationship is growing and im raveling in it. oh revali your jealousy is showing. i dont know why it surprises me that revali is possessive of evangeline when it comes to link, oh you

i was hoping for evangeline to go to vah medoh, so cooooool! AND SHE MADE CONTACT LIKE WOW

now i can stop thinking how for some reason revali leaves evangeline on vah medoh when he goes to meet the other champions and princess at the entrance of mount lanayru; and she's there to see revali battle windblight ganon... im so excited to get to that part, wont be long now perhaps after winter

thank you for this extra long chapter! i really liked it
take care as well! see ya!

That was just brilliant! Evangile might not have the strength of a champion like Link, or the ability to fly like Revali, but she has the heart of a golden Lynel.

The dialogue between Eva (My little nickname for our stubborn human) and Vah Medoh came out of nowhere. Seeing them communicate made me smile like an idiot.

Another instant where I smiled like an idiot was the little conversation Eva and Link had. That was just simply cute~

Amazing chapter length. One can almost say it was as big as two chapters.

Small spelling and grammatical errors here and there. Not a back-breaking issue.

Besides that, I like how you ended this. A ton of possibilities for the next chapter.

Would Eva talk with Link again while Revali talked with Zelda?

Would Zelda notice and perhaps get jealous? She strikes me as a Tsundere who has a crush on Link but won't admit it.

Would Revali, now that Eva knows about Calamity Ganon, feel the need to train her with a bow at the flight range, given the BS Eva said about smooth stone climbing was... BS...

Oh, the possibilities and the chances~ The list is endless!

I look forward to your next chapter with bated breath. I am rooting for you~

Godspeed!

It’s nice to hear from you again! I love this story so much! Hopefully your doing ok with thei Covid-19 Lockdown. Anyways this is a nice comeback chapter and I love the Snowquill armor you did and the Morse code was genius for the Divine Beast to communicate! I can’t wait to see what else you have planned! Plus I’m curios to see how you’ll deal with the events of Calamity Ganon happening with the only human in hurdle in danger. Can’t wait to see what you come up with next! You’ve got me hyped up for it! Happy writing!

So interesting, I didn’t realize there was Morse code in the divine beast music! Love this chapter, especially her interactions with Vah Medoh

YYYYYYYEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSS! I needed this! More development between our two protags. And Link and Zelda! I hope they meet Evangeline next chapter (and eventually the rest of the Champions as well). Patiently waiting for the next chap (for this and the other story with Sophia and Sidon).

Damn I'm late ! Didn't get any notification for the new chapter. I'm so sorry :(
Great chapter ! Eva will need new friends for sure :D oh I can't wait to see Link. That's gonna be fun with Revali XD

Keep up the good work !

Please continue!

You know, the big question for me was whether or not Revali would be genuinely curious. Douche fits much better.

A pleasant surprise to see him go along with Evangeline's vulgarity. She'll have to work to trip him up. But I already have ideas how.

YAAAS, you updated! Great chapter, I give it three huzzahs! Thank you for writing it!

I love this story so far and seeing Revali get so flustered into expressing his gratitude to Evangeline for the new blanket was cute! And finding out Locke may be smiten with her is starting to stir up a possible love triangle even if Evangeline is too dense to see it until it’s said right up front to her. Anyways continue writing this story! It’s got a lot of potential and I have my mind going in circles trying to figure out how you’ll have Evangeline and Revali’a relationship change when Calamity Ganon arrives and slays the champions... I don’t know what I’m thinking but it’s probably gonna be heartbreaking for both. Anyways you have a wonderful Christmas and New Years and I await your next update!

Sincerely yours,
Mimzy94

Ok, I completely and utterly adored this. I am so happy you're updating again! I've missed how you write Revali

Sure not much brains in there. If we had a high altitude EMP attack or a Carrington Event modern day version she'd be 'That' person that screws it up for the survival group.

I’m so happy to see another update but I am less happy with Revali for the way he reacted to Evangeline’s gift. Can’t wait to see what you have in store for the main plot!

Awww how cute~! I’m so glad you were able to write another chapter! It was really good! Can’t wait for more!