| Reviews for The Assassin Known as Paladin |
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  paradoxreader chapter 13 . 12/27/2019 i vote for arkos and for jaune to be the ine unrequitnted love yang couldny have and help her grow as a person...they have a special bond yet never together...her knight that she cant have...kind da like hanekawa and araragi from nekomingatari at the end of the anime series season 6 or 7. plus seriously so much potential...limelight upoer society n down low assasin...the lady who want a escape but cant ...a lil wild side...plus be funny if pryhha start loving the thrill of breaking the law and the entire juniper have a crated underworld persona by jaune...haha he knows the importance of having a back up plan if they all fuck up ot shit hit the fan.. so he taught them how to survive and run out to another kingdom n how to regroup plus i love the family vibe of juniper...jaune the mother hen n general care taker...nora the energetic sister...pryhha can be seen as the secretly n only with jnpr to love being being pampered n childish like a child...likes be spoiled n excitable to catch up her missing child hood...ren the only sensible younger brother to jaune hahaha |
 ThatGuyYouMet chapter 13 . 12/20/2019 Please don't delete. |
| Dracus6 chapter 13 . 12/20/2019 Goblin Slayer story can you make a goblin slayer story. hero and her companions need goblin slayer assist to stop a evil mage with a army of goblins and demons from resurrect a demon lord. watch has goblin slayer will saved the world from goblins and demons. p.s goblin slayer has the potential to kill other monsters. p.s.s hero will see goblin slayer again has she developed romantic feelings towards him. it will be like Lord of the Rings Goblin Slayer x Hero x Sage x Sword Saint |
| mistersnx chapter 13 . 12/20/2019 I like the rewrite for Jaune Wick... due to being a fun read! also team Arkos and maybe 2 aditional ? |
| Mecharic chapter 13 . 12/20/2019 I very much enjoyed this story and think that a rewrite would be a solid bet on keeping readers interested. Most OC fics do poorly (I know I tend to skip them over myself, though I try not to since they can be pretty good) so I'd avoid one of those. Jaune-AUs are pretty common, but if you can make yours special it'll have solid views as well. Self-Inserts are something I avoid like the plague itself. Regardless, it was a fun run, and not a bad story even if it wasn't the most consistent. |
| Roland's Blade chapter 3 . 7/27/2019 Oh noes, not a harem pls no. |
| LastPenis chapter 12 . 5/26/2019 this is just RWBY canon so far |
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/25/2019 I like the idea of jaune have a harem and slow development with the girls and have moments with them like Pyrrha, ruby, Blake or have romantic with yang. |
| Guest chapter 12 . 5/25/2019 You should update this is great it would be a shame if you don't continue with the story |
| Viking chapter 11 . 3/28/2019 Not to seem like a prick or impatient, but when’s the next chapter |
| adbelvd chapter 11 . 3/26/2019 Incredibly history and chapter, hope you could update it. |
| ArcofUA chapter 11 . 2/14/2019 I need more! |
| Viking chapter 11 . 2/7/2019 Keep this awesome story going my dude |
| ThatGuyYouMet chapter 11 . 2/2/2019 Good story. Ignore the damn haters. |
| Dracus6 chapter 7 . 1/20/2019 Rwby AU Kingsman |
