lmao not hating but how many time are going to use face plant and anime face. Good book but as a friendly request please put different idk facial expressions I think that's what that is.

i feel like chapter 6 is just kinda messed up. yeah, goes to chaos land or whatever and suddenly all his friends are back from the living! what a lame excuse.
i would mind if silena or beck are back but seriously, bianca, luke, ethan , leo and calypso? bruh.
my imagination and my brain is going to explode. honestly.
doing this kinda messed up the story plot, cos theres gonna he that cliche "WOW - [insert dead person here] - YOUR BACK! and then the commander of chaos army cliche crap. sorry, but its kinda just overused by now.
other than that, its a decent story but you should edit it for grammar mistakes or tweak the story a bit. too bad u wont read this cos u havent updated for a while.
bye

Just saw you update on the MCU and My hero Academia. Hopefully you can update the New Titans: Fall of Olympus

Please update this is one of my favorite stories please update I want to know what will happen

The reunion scenes are so

Percy ain’t no greatest demigod of all time look at Theseus or Odysseus

don't abandon this pls

Come on! Why did you leave this story. Obviously Lucifer was the person at the end of this chapter and the confrontation and final battles would have been incredible. Annabeth would likely have been locked up on Ogygia because of her daughter which allowed her to live. Hephestus would likely have been locked up as well due to him not actually partaking in the war itself. The rest would have been faded or tortured for eternity (Ryan, Zane, Athena and maybe Zeus). We didn't get to find out all of the Prophecy or if the fountain of youth was in play (suggested by one of the lines in the prophecy). There could have been a chapter/epilogue for the aftermath and recovery of the world after the mortal ww3 sent humanity back into an age before electricity. The potential that has been lost by abandoned this story is staggering, especially after such large, expansive, in depth chapters stacking more and more detail into this unique adaptation of the PJO world

Is it bad that I kind of feel sorry for Annabeth. I mean she was manipulated, tricked and cursed into her betrayal and very clear regrets it. If she wasn't immortal I wouldn't be surprised if she had taken her own life and forced herself to fade just to end it all.

This is so cliche it’s crazy lol. Also the greatest demigods? I know everyone likes to rag on the gods but the whole Zane and Ryan thing just makes no sense. They literally have done nothing of worth. Maybe if they did a couple quests there can be some sort of vague justification, but all this seems to me is that you hate some guys irl and are using their names in your story. Or I’m wrong idk. I’ll keep reading see what happens

So Chaos couldn't help because of... Ancient Laws... the laws HE created. Yeah, that's stupid. *Extreme eyebrow raise* That's why dictatorships dont work, sometimes you need someone to slap some sense into you.

Yaaay somehow we got to apolagetics 'bout how it was all Lucy's fault, and the God being guilt free...

But if you leave a knife with a small child, tell the child where the knife is, and another guy who's like, just do it, just stab the table. It wont matter if you tell them not to stab the table, of course it's much worse than that, but I digress.

The apolagetics are annoying. A betrayal story doesnt have to be unoriginal like yours is. Though this is a turn.

Yaaaaay... Deism... how fun

So you just kinda... stole your plot from half a dozen other betrayal fics. Honestly most of them do just steal from one another. Theres only been 4 or 5 that are actually unique.

How? Why does Nico being gay mean anything? Some people are just gay, theres nothing wrong with that. In fact, statistically it makes sense that one of the main characters were gay. There are about, 10 or 11 main Demigods, so yeah.