Gross.

What?!

This gets worse and worse.

This story is stupid. Not gonna deny it.

I enjoyed all this! It seemed all of them can be a long shot! Thanks for writing HG!

But she's going to get them anyway!

I love soulmate fics! This is cute, I wonder how Harry felt seeing her name for the first time, since it's such an unusual name.

Some very interesting stories about soulmates and how they get together.

Your feedback from Hogwarts for Assignment 2 (Charms)

Your Grade: 19/20 (O)
Your Examiner: Sophie H (3cheersforidiots)
Your Feedback:

To start off, there weren't physical descriptions, which is okay, since we all know the characters well, and it might have disrupted the Flow. Though, the characters were meeting for the first time (and second and third), so that could have given way for something like that.

Anyway, I was interested to find that you made Harry good at romancing people, which goes contrary to what most fans do with him (I'm pretty sure that his incompetence in this field is actually canon, but I guess times change). Either way, although there wasn't much room for depth, both Ginny and Harry were true to their character.

This was also a nice AU, not something I've seen before. The story itself didn't tell us much new about anything, but the AU in itself is worth it.

However, I will deduct half a point for using the Seventh Son of a Seventh Son idea, since you were among the three people with the same idea that I had to grade.

Okay, so the Flow was smooth and the dialogue was natural, and overall, the story was written well, but this story felt more like a prologue to something longer, bigger, than a story on its own.

That said, your scenes were nicely chosen, and I appreciate that you didn't drag out the story more than what it was supposed to be.

The prompt was used well, and I like that you used it to connect it to the happenings and the characters, so that it was actually imbued in the story. I've already talked about the originality, but I appreciate that you used the prompt more than once.

While I enjoyed it, since it was a fluffy drabble you can't not enjoy, it didn't really give me anything new, since there wasn't much plot to begin with. That said, since it was short and not overbearing, it managed to keep me entertained all the while, and it was a nice read.

For SPaG, there wasn't much to find due to the shortness of the story, so the maximum I could find were minor mishaps. Altogether, though, every aspect of SPaG was well done, both punctuation, spelling, tense and syntax. There weren't any slip-ups and the story was easy to read.

Oh, nice Stories you've got here! I really like them:)
Can I ask for a Oneshot here? I'd like an Evil!Harry and Light!Ginny story? Pretty pretty please?

Great stories. I really wish you write a follow chapter or maybe a separate story for chapters 30 and 31. I really would love to know what happens to them.

I hate how in the last two stories, we are left to wonder. I prefer when you have them meet and know they are soulmates

talk to him about it and tell him that he is her soulmate.

where is the rest

great chapter