| Reviews for Dark Flame |
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   sairakanzaki chapter 25 . 6/19 He should get his power! But i want ace to meet another vampire lord aside from vincent! Hehehe It's been a while since you updated i really thought you abandoned this amazing story., I'm glad you didn't, I'm so happy you updated! Please update very soon ;) |
| 3A07 chapter 25 . 6/19 Hello, I really hope Ace gets his fruit back... Its just natural wirh his fiery personaliry. |
| sairakanzaki chapter 23 . 2/22 This is great story. I want a powerful witch to abduct ace, but that witch turns out to be roger's best friend hehehe but the others didn't know that. Hahaha or one of the vampire lords will kidnap ace hahaha. Please update soon. |
| Jasmine chapter 23 . 2/21 I would like them to see if they can get the book from the Dead Doctors themselves. It's going to be a lot more helpful to them. To reverse the ritual on Ace. Also they need to do it and fast. Than I think that's Ace should find Vincent and soon. He might need to know about the Witch who is behind this all. |
| Mucaliliana chapter 22 . 2/11 The next chapter please! I need it, I'm so worry about my Ace |
| Luffy's wife chapter 22 . 12/12/2019 AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH, I'M SO EXCITED! THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE, I HOPE TO READ MORE IN THE FUTURE! |
| maripaodragonz chapter 22 . 12/1/2019 Es hermoso! Me encanta esta historia, tus historias, como escribes, esta genial. Me parecería demasiado lindo si unieras a Marco con Ace, es mi pareja favorita y seria muy muy muyy feliz de verla en esta historia, MarAce Forever! ;) Espero que estés bien y actualices pronto, gracias por seguir escribiendo esta maravillosa historia (y todas las demás) |
| sairakanzaki chapter 22 . 11/14/2019 Such beautiful story. Please update soon. Hopefully everything will be fine for ace! What if her mother will rise from the ashes? Hahaha |
| Guest chapter 21 . 8/27/2019 AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I cannot breathe! Please update soon, I'm really looking forward to it! |
| 3A07 chapter 21 . 5/20/2019 I love this! It almoSt reads like mini 1-3 chapters stories. Looking forward to read what happens next! |
| sairakanzaki chapter 21 . 5/20/2019 Hopefully everything will be fine. Is ace becoming a human? Hahaha. Please update soon. |
| kittyface27 chapter 6 . 3/3/2019 I love the story, and am very curious as to why the quotation marks look like two dots. Is that just me? |
| POE-LITE chapter 20 . 11/27/2018 I really love this! And happy that Marco sees Ace as a brother cause it'd be weird if it went romantic cause Marco is like way older than him, but I still love the closeness and bonding! And I think it's adorable whenever Ace scares him with his vampire, good work! P.S., is Ace going to die in this book? Please say no my little heart is too broken for that (a |
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/4/2018 *cring* Eye balls? For real? . YUCK! Awe man that actually got my stomach to churn a bit. I sometimes hate how well I can visualize things. It good so far. Again I think you should reword some of the sentences. Reading it out loud can really help catch any errors or funny sounding sentences. And reason the sentences backwards can help too. Liking it a lot so far! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/4/2018 "A-, Oh. Asleep..." Me: Ppfftt hah! Lol! That got a good laugh out of me. Also I would have done exactly as what as would have in the pretending to be asleep situation. I like how realistic you made him act. There are a few sentences that could be reworded a bit, and a few typos and punctuation errors. But I'm really enjoying the story! |
