Yo, this story is ballin as all hell. You gotta do more, I need it.

The first thing that come at mind when I read the oath part was: disgusting and its not because of the blood but because of the words

I don't know if your still working on this or not but if you aren't I really hope you do get back to it soon because it's one of my favourite rwby stories and I really want to see where you go with it

I love the story and I hope see more soon. Have a good day.

Great fic I can't wait for the next chapter. Really hope its a harem coming.

I am so invested in this story now. I love it! Can’t wait to see move of the budding 4 way relationship

I want Blake to also have feelings for him.

Love it. Great chapter.

Blake is Jaune's wingwoman, she got him covered XD

That oath he took was super cringy no one speaks like that

I really want to tell you to focus solely on this fiction because the potential is limitless not to mention you have my favorite ships going in it, but an artist must never be limited by others only by what they choose. Can you at least get a little further into the story please, I like the new emblem, but I'd hope you alter Corcea Mors, or at least its shield to turn into either gauntlets or guns or give him a freaking gun, seriously it bothers me even in canon how he still doesn't have a gun especially when everyone and their grandma has a gun. I get the whole knight aspect crap but having access to long range capabilities is not a hindrance nor should it be looked down upon.

If you want any ideas on what Jaunes new outfit should look like I have a few ideas or fanart I could show you, if you're interested just leave a message at the end of the next chapter and I'll review on my actual account. If not than whatever you choose I'll support cause I'm really enjoying this story.

Yay new chapter. Cheers.
Looking forward to more. I enjoy stories like this.
Tell me will his sisters appear in future?
Are they bro cons or just really overprotective?

I love this story.

This was a great chapter,
Please keep up the awesome work.

Table-lift challenge?

I know I heard of that somewhere but where...