This is so good. I really enjoyed all these emotional scenes with Noct meeting Prompto and Ignis again.

This is even better than I thought it would be. Love the way you included Luna (I was kinda afraid she wouldn't show up again after the prologue) and her conversations with Noct are so much fun. Like when she explained to Noct to actually clean his flat and going on how adorable teenage Noct was. Haha. Super intruged how this all will play out.

Such a great idea! I am hooked. :D

Just FYI, I am fine with the pacing. This was a great chapter!

Oh boy, that’s gonna be a fight-look before you leap Luna! But I’m really interested to see how this all goes down, and how long noct and Luna will be able to keep the “we know how this went the first time...!” From bubbling to the surface. I believe in them though!

Please update this soon. I am really interested in seeing where you take this.

This is a defiantly a different take on the whole time travel story. I love that Noctis actually got to sit down and talk with his dad instead of the story starring when they are already on the run. I'm a looking toward to your next chapter, until next time keep up the good work!

After reading a few times. I’m getting the bad feeling Accius is the Accuser aka Ardyn. He is spying on Noctis right?

The plot thickens! I wonder if they'll be able to tell more to Regis? And sooner or later I wonder if someone will catch on about Luna as well. And with ravus potentially in the mix in the future too...ahh! Looking forward to the next chapter! Best of luck hanging in at uni!

Oh boy, this is gonna be rough going for them...hang in there you two!

Ooh I like it so far, though I personally never thought Noct's friends died at the end of the game. I interpreted it differently. I shall be interested to see where you take it. I was hoping Nyx would appear, I was sad he died but maybe in this he won't die...who knows...I shall await you next chapter with curious anticipation. x

Gosh I really love this. It is so refreshing to see our favorite guys and gals in a completely different set of circumstances. You write them all so well. It's exciting because I don't know what is going to happen next because of its divergence from the game, but still such solid foundations of in-game lore. Color me impressed! Keep up the excellent work!

Ohh shoot. This will be a very different eos if the oracles been gone. But the way noct and Luna worked around only sending one back was clever! Interested to see what happens next!

This is great! I don't usually like messing with the ending too much but this is well thought out and I'm excited to see where this goes. Great job!

This chapter was a bit boring since nothing really happened, and I didn't particularly care for the first half of the chapter; Noctis's conversation with Luna was a bit annoying and redundant.