Great story!

I want to start out by saying that I love the idea and just the plot and ugh! It makes so much sense. Zeno visited all the others, so why wouldn't he visit his Little Miss? And it also explains why Zeno didn't react when he met Yona for the "first" time.

But, your spelling isn't the greatest. Technically, they're all words, but many were the wrong words for the context. (i.e. "mesmerized" instead of "memorized")

Still, I loved this! ~Scarlet

Sweet

Very sweet! I do encourage you to reread and fix up grammatical errors, because they can be jarring for a reader. :)