Please update this! This sounds too awesome to be discontinued or left on hiatus

Only one chapter, huh? This is still great! Great storyline!

This is great can't wait to read more!

i dont know why superman was always found wanting when the story becomes focus on conner kent. it was as if, there's some sort of perverse fun in putting him down as a failure just because one aspect of his life like "fatherhood" is not meet, all of a sudden all the goods that he does to this earth is moot...at least in yj fanfiction... so anyway, i hope you give superman leeway to learn from his mistake and redeemed himself...otherwise, it's insulting to be continually defined as a "bad person" in a situation that was not by your own invention... he might not react well but did he proactively made conner miserable? moving on, i pray clark kent would win this battle. or you could just rubbed it in and made Bruce saint of orphans- its your story.

ok first:
so far so good. a couple of spelling and grammar mistakes here and there but pretty good. I want to see Superman's reaction! XD

now as for the response to the first reviewer about villainizing Superman:
ok, I get it, Superman was "violated" they stole his DNA and turned it into a weapon. but you have to also think: Connor is also the victim. he wasn't asked to be a weapon, let alone exist. the guy may be physically 16 but in a sense and technically, he's just a kid!

there's my 2 cents

So Superman who was violated and essentially raped and given a child without his consent and Needed some time to adjust like any person would need. Is going to be vilainized for having realistic feelings? Great.